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A user with 6 edits. Account created on 7 March 2023.
7 August 2024
- 18:5018:50, 7 August 2024 diff hist −1 m Nirnaya Shrestha Changed "holds" to "hold" for subject-verb agreement. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:4818:48, 7 August 2024 diff hist +1 m Tunji Sowande Added a comma after "Lagos, Nigeria" for proper punctuation. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:4618:46, 7 August 2024 diff hist +5 Home wiring Changes Made: Grammar and Punctuation: Added "systems" after "telephone" for clarity. Clarity and Consistency: Changed "homeowner" to "homeowners" for subject-verb agreement. Ensured the sentence structure was consistent and clear for better readability. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:4418:44, 7 August 2024 diff hist +13 m Carrier cloud Grammar Corrections: Added a hyphen to "carrier grade" making it "carrier-grade" for consistency and correctness. Removed the comma after "data center" in "In contrast, classic cloud computing focuses on the data center, and does not address" to avoid a comma splice. Added a hyphen in "business critical" making it "business-critical" to properly form a compound adjective. current Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:4018:40, 7 August 2024 diff hist −2 m Newcastle Customs House Changed "were" to "was" in "A plan for a new building proposed by architect James Barnet were accepted by the government." Changed "and October of that year" to "By October of that year" for clarity and smoother transition. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 18:3718:37, 7 August 2024 diff hist +1 m Wind power in Belarus Added a space between "106" and "MW" to correctly format the unit of measurement. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit