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Out From Egypt #2

Shadow of the Storm

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In the darkness of the storm's shadow, only truth can light her way.

Having escaped Egypt with the other Hebrews during the Exodus, Shira is now living in freedom at the foot of Mount Sinai. When the people rebel by worshipping a golden idol, the ensuing chaos gives Shira an unexpected opportunity to assist a midwife. When the experience awakens a new desire in her, she defies her mother's wish for her to continue in the family weaving trade and pursues her heart's calling as an apprentice midwife.

But when a delivery goes horribly wrong, Shira finds herself in an impossible situation and bound to a man who betrayed her. As contention between the Hebrew tribes and the foreigners fans the flames of another dangerous rebellion, Shira comes face to face with the long-hidden pain of her past. Can she let go of all that has defined her to embrace who she truly is and believe in a hopeful future?

349 pages, Paperback

First published October 1, 2016

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Connilyn Cossette

22 books2,195 followers
Connilyn Cossette is a Christy Award-winning and bestselling author of stories that illuminate the ancient world of the Bible, in hopes readers will dig deeper into the Word and encounter the Great Storyteller himself within their pages. A recent breast cancer survivor and adoptive mom of her two greatest gifts, she lives in a small town south of Dallas, Texas. Connect with her at ConnilynCossette.com

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Profile Image for Madelyn.
84 reviews103 followers
November 24, 2016
Ancient Egypt. We think pyramids, people with black eyeliner and malicious pharos.

Israelites. We think Star of David, Bethlehem, and Jesus.

Wilderness. We think tan desert land where one hill isn’t distinguishable from the other, we think famine and pestilence.

Maybe that’s just me, but I’m fairly certain we each have our own stiff, unrealistic stereotypes. We’ve confined and under-empathized many parts of the Bible, and I’m saddened that we so often take a story as vibrant as the 40-year escapade with Moses and God’s people and dim it down to colorless drab, emotionless pity, and a boxed message.

Connilyn brought life abundant to the years of wandering. She showed that there is adventure to be found in deserts, that we are prone to confine what desert means, that there is landscape to be traversed, rivers to be played in, and trees to climb.

Shadow of the Storm produced a vivacious setting, one that you wanted to be a part of. It drew you in. It changed the way you saw Egypt. I consider myself fortunate for having read this. It was fiction, yes. But it was Biblical fiction. It was historical fiction. It was factual fiction. You could distinguish easily what was true-to-history (The nomadic traveling of the desert, the Levites massacring other tribes that refused to comply with the laws of God, and the Ten Commandments) and what was a part of the storyline. Even then, the characters and situations combined flawlessly with the reality of the times, and what is depicted in Exodus.

The building of the tabernacle was also exceptionally thought-provoking. Maybe I just didn’t pay attention in Sunday school, but I had no idea that when it was built, the sacrificial “buildings” were fixed structures. (Don’t judge! Maybe I just didn’t take time to consider it.) Meaning, the Israelites dug holes in the ground and set up the entire edifice with pillars, and then when they started journeying again, they had to take down and relocate the whole shebang. What a job.

To top it off, I even learned some Hebrew. The author has a knack for sticking in the Hebrew equivalent to words that were repetitive, such as ima for mother.

Overall, I would definitely recommend this book. But I would only recommend it to women, probably. Not because it’s chick-fic, that’s hardly the case, but because of the material. Shira is training to be a midwife, and I felt that at times it might touch on some information that could be inappropriate for men or young men.

See the full review on my blog: www.literarycafe.weebly.com

*Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers for my
Honest opinion. I was not obligated to a positive review*
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151 reviews46 followers
March 15, 2017
I need it now. And that cover. *sigh*

UPDATE

Just beautiful. I love everything about this book, and this series. *No words*
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Author 2 books372 followers
April 25, 2017
I loved this book so very much! Connilyn Cossette is a talented writer, and brings the Biblical days and ancient Hebrew and Egyptian characters to life. After just enjoying the first book of the OUT FROM EGYPT series, I was unprepared for how Shadow of the Storm would sweep me away and capture my heart. The writing is so beautiful! The characters real. The setting intriguing. The retelling of the Hebrew slaves coming out of Egypt fascinating and soul-touching. The way this author weaves a faith theme into her stories is seamless and enrapturing. I felt in awe beneath the holiness, and power, and love of God.

Shira is an amazing character. I adored her. Her story, during the Hebrew people's 40 years at the foot of Mount Sinai, was fascinating. I loved her journey of faith. Her work as a midwife. Her romance. Her motherhood. It was all so simply beautiful.

There were some hard times too. Malicious characters. Dreadful moments. Terrible disappearances. Wrong choices. Just ... life. But it all came to a magnificent conclusion. I liked seeing brief glimpses of Moses and his sister Miriam of the Bible, too. *smiles*

I don't always enjoy novels set during the Biblical days, but Shadow of the Storm was incredible. I highly recommend to adults who enjoy Christian fiction! This story is unique and thrilling. I can hardly wait to read the third book, Wings of the Wind!
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3,239 reviews
April 23, 2019
The Hebrews have escaped the Egyptians, wandered through the desert, and are now camped at the base of Mt. Sinai. They will spend a year there as Moses communes with God and receives the Ten Commandments and as the Hebrews lose faith and build a golden idol. Shira, from Book 1, a young Egyptian woman who has become a follower of Yahweh because of her best friend, Kira a young Hebrew woman, is the focus of this book.

Although I found the story very enjoyable, I didn't feel the Biblical connection as strongly as in Book 1. This period has only brief mentions in Exodus, so Cossette had to pull from what little there is. Her depictions of the disagreements between the various tribes made complete sense since the brothers of Joseph had always been squabbling amongst themselves. The descent into idol worship of some of the Hebrews along with the persistent worship of idols from the various non-Hebrew and Egyptian stragglers accompanying them also led to many disagreements.

I loved seeing Shira grow and mature both in her faith and her understanding of what she wanted to do with her life. It was very interesting to learn about the midwives and their birthing practices during this time period. Overall, a good series of Biblical fiction.
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505 reviews96 followers
May 23, 2017
Following the Exodus story after fleeing from Pharaoh's army across the Red Sea, the massive group of Hebrew and Yahweh-following Egyptians set up camp at the base of Mount Sinai. Mosheh (Moses) left them to go and speak with God to whom has settled his cloud upon the top of the mountain. After many days, Mosheh failed to return and the people began to lose hope. Turning back to their idolatrous ways, they quickly gained the attention of Yahweh, who in turn, unleashed his wrath upon them. 

In the midst of chaos, many women that are pregnant are thrown into labor because of the stressful event. It is in this moment that Shira feels a sudden calling to midwifery. Born into a family where the women are weavers, Shira is afraid that her mother will dissuade her from her desire, and struggles to find a way to respect everyone, including herself if she were to persue this new vocation. 

It is through her opportunity with this new occupation that she is thrown into a completely different life that she thought she could have. But with that, many trials and difficulties await her. 

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Wow! I loved this book! The writing was so much better when compared to Counted With the Stars (which was my main issue with the first book.) I loved the premise of the first book, but its execution just wasn't enough for me. This book's story-line, complex characters, and the way in which it was written was very enjoyable.

Not only was the book enjoyable, there were many lessons to take away from it. Several major and minor themes are present throughout, and definitely require attention. I'll be discussing a few here briefly, but not too much so I don't give anything away. They have been organized into two main themes, with subcategories. 

Healing

Healing is by far the overarching theme in Shadow of the Storm. What I appreciated about it most was how it looked at different angles as to how a person heals from an experience in their life which is traumatic in some way, shape, or form.

The text alternates from the perspectives of Shira and Dvorah, two women with very different, but also similar backgrounds. Each woman represents a different type of path to healing. While Ayal, Eben, Jumo, Kiya, and the other characters have their own pasts and instances to heal from, these two are the most prominent in their quest to recovery. 
"You can tuck your head under your wing for a while, Shira, and wait out this storm. But you will fly again."

Shira underwent a traumatic event when she was young. Many repercussions came from that instance, and caused her to suffer in many ways. Luckily, she had a strong group of people surrounding her to help encourage her on her path of healing. While it takes time, with the right motivation, one can recover. 
"There will be times when there is nothing you can do but survive, to place one foot after the other into the driving rain."

Dvorah represented a very different path one can take. After working in an Egyptian brothel for many years, and now placed under her brother-in-law's care after her husband was killed, Dvorah finds herself stuck in a terrible situation. In order to keep Hassam's advances at bay, she must lower herself to spying and stealing. Dvorah is terrified, and will stop at nothing to find a way to get out of her situation for a "safer" one---even if it includes sabotaging another's life.

Instead of healing, Dvorah is simply "surviving." Without a way out of her situation, she can do nothing but that.

Subcategory: Healing from sexual assault and abuse

Shira and Dvorah are alike in the fact that they both have experienced assault and abuse. I won't go into much detail on this one because then spoilers would be everywhere. However, I would like to point out that for people who take the standpoint that anyone can simply "walk away" from dangerous and harmful situations like these, it is not truth. Without having a helping hand from the outside reaching in, some people are literally lost in these prisons. It is important to realize that these are matters to not take lightly, and people who are victims cannot always break free by their own desire alone. 

Forgiveness

Forgiveness is all-encompassing in this story; forgiving others, and forgiving yourself is key to move toward the path of healing. 

Subcategory: Strength in self

Especially in Shira's case, she learns that through forgiveness and healing, strength and confidence in oneself grows. It was so inspiring to see how much Shira's character blossomed throughout this book.

Overall, I really loved this book. Although it discusses some very difficult topics, it was written very well and had a lot for the reader to learn from and take away.

The one thing that bothered me, was how every time Shira was about to have "the discussion" with a certain someone, they were interrupted! It's always a clever tactic to use on the author's end to keep the reader engaged. It just had me throwing my hands in the air saying, "Oh! COME ON!" 

Anyways, I would recommend this book, and the Out from Egypt series to anyone. 
"The broken pieces will make this vessel even better."

Sexual content: There is a non-graphic rape scene along with an attempted seduction scene.

5 stars.

See more of this review and others on my website: She's Going Book Crazy
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Author 2 books281 followers
March 20, 2017
Incredible.

Beautiful.

Carefully crafted writing pens the powerful moments of biblical history and breathes fictional life into them! I am speechless and utterly impressed.
Some of the themes in here are hard to deal with and so age restriction will be high and listed as an adult only book.

Wow!

16+
Recommended as an Adult Christian Biblical Fiction novel
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790 reviews350 followers
January 8, 2018
Set during the tumultuous time of Israel’s beginning as a unified nation, Shadow of the Storm brings the life of the Hebrew tribes into sharp relief. Through the eyes of Shira, a woman still fighting the battles of her past, readers see these events firsthand through engrossing first-person narration. Shira’s insecurities make her a realistic, relatable character. My heart was stirred and found kinship with her; doubts and fears keep her from fully embracing her desire to be a midwife. Despite having a natural talent for it, her self-doubt and mistakes keep her from moving forward.

There are times where it feels like books were placed in my life exactly when I needed it. The story takes on a personal level, and I see myself in the character so strongly, that I know that the timing is no accident. This was completely and entirely my experience while reading Shadow of the Storm and discovering Shira’s story. It was a joy to see Kiya, Eben and Jumo again. The friendship between Shira and Kiya is definitely a highlight of the story, and I’m glad that the familial relationships didn’t get lost in the plot or any romantic elements. Ayal is an intriguing character – despite not knowing his true intentions and a shaky beginning, I found myself wanting his character to be constant.

Dvorah is one character that served a dual purpose for me. At first I wasn’t sure how I felt about the addition of another character’s perspective, but as the story continues, Cossette does something that not many authors accomplish – make an unlikable, deplorable character provoke empathy within me. I found myself reacting strongly to Dvorah’s decisions – and by strongly, I distinctly remember saying out loud to my husband that I wanted to punch her in the face…um, oops? Seriously though, any read that elicits such an emotion from me is a winner in my book.

In addition to providing a superb antagonist, Dvorah brought in an outsider perspective as well. I had honestly never really thought of how wild it would have been for so many people, from so many different backgrounds, would have functioned as a whole, while traveling through the desert. I suppose I never thought about the fact that, with the Hebrew tribes, some groups might have just been “tagging along,” for lack of a better phrase, because it was better than the life they left behind. Just because they were following Moses out of Egypt didn’t mean they left their prejudices and ingrained beliefs behind, nor did it mean that their beliefs aligned with the Hebrews. These differences and the issues that arose from them are fascinating and add a great element to the story.

This powerful story has everything I look for in a novel. I was held riveted by the plot, Shira’s character, and the tender romance. Most importantly, this is a faith-affirming story that reminds reader of how God uses trials and setbacks to bolster faith and keep our eyes set on Him. This is one of my favorite books of 2016, and I am so looking forward to book 3 in the Out from Egypt series, Wings of the Wind. I highly recommend Shadow of the Storm to readers who enjoy Biblical fiction and an immersive first-person narrative.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from the publisher, which I chose to review.
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467 reviews319 followers
September 9, 2016
Originally posted on ChristianShelfEsteem.wordpress.com {#biblicalfictionfriday}

In Shadow of the Storm, Connilyn Cossette takes history and makes it “herstory.” A bold endeavor, Cossette captures a tumultuous period in Israel’s history through the eyes of several women. Penned within these pages is an account of their first year in the wilderness when manna began to rain from heaven, Ten Commandments were given, idols destroyed, and the glory of the Lord filled the tabernacle.

Under God’s care the fledgling nation is not only surviving, they are multiplying. Midwives like Reva urgently need new women to apprentice in their trade to keep up with the ever increasing number of births. Despite Reva’s encouragement and tutelage, Shira allows her fear and self-doubt to steer her away from her calling to midwifery. The way the author uses Shira’s story to draw attention to these stumbling blocks of faith was clever. Many women will empathize with Shira which should make for lively book club banter.

It was a comfort to have Kiya, Eben, and Jumo return in book 2. Although the men didn’t play as large of roles as they did in Counted With the Stars, the sisterly bond between Kiya and Shira forged even deeper roots. Futhermore, new characters like Ayal (Shira’s romantic interest) and Dvorah added depth while ushering in all sorts of dramatic twists!

Since finishing the book I’ve thought back on how, while camped at the base of Mt. Sinai, the multitude who’d fled Egypt were just beginning to learn what it meant to be a people set apart to God. They brought more than just personal items out of Egypt — their selfish habits, idols, and old grudges also made the trip. This book reminded me of how God uses storms (trials) to refine us, build our character, and keep us anchored to the Rock. Shadow of the Storm is a powerful story that I highly recommend!

I received this book free from the publisher through the NetGalley review program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
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345 reviews105 followers
August 16, 2019
This book was a solid 4.5 stars. I so loved hearing Shira's story of how violence toward her as a young child made her think she was not worthy of a husband and family. But it was her brother's friend, Ayal, that believed she was so much more, that she just needed to believe in herself as much as he and Yahweh did. Though neither had come without their faults, forgiveness was easy for them. Whether it was for each other, or those who defied them and meant to bring them harm, they showed and spoke forgiveness.

I am enjoying this series very much. I am a little sad to start the last book and see how everyone settles in Canaan.
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1,302 reviews148 followers
April 26, 2023
I can't tell yall how much I'm loving this series! This book was even better than the first, in my humble opinion. Shira and I made fast friends from the first time I read about her in Counted In The Stars. I was so excited to read her story. She was absolutely precious, and I am so glad she got a happy one. Although, the road to it was hard one. This author has a wonderful pinterest page too,and I've enjoyed perusing her pictures that inspired this book.
Now... on to the next book in the series! I am addicted apparently!
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2,041 reviews601 followers
October 16, 2016
Once again new author Connilyn Cossette has delivered a beautifully written Biblical Fiction novel. I found myself comparing her sophomore novel to Tessa Afshar's Land of Silence. Both authors deliver a well done Biblical Fiction novel.

In Shadow of the Storm, the physical and time setting is the year that the Hebrews (and others) spent at the base of Mount Sanai. While the action that occurred during that year was substantially less than the plagues that occurred in her freshman novel, Counted With the Stars, Shadow of the Storm was rich in historical detail.

Shira is the main character in Shadow of the Storm. It was a compelling story and I enjoyed Shira's journey.

I look forward to the continuing journey of the Hebrews. The Out From Egypt series is highly recommended for readers that enjoy Biblical Fiction.

My gratitude to the author and publisher, Bethany House, for a complimentary copy of the novel. The opinions expressed are my own. I was not required to write a review.
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November 7, 2016
Cossette has an extraordinary way of weaving words into an unforgettable story tapestry, working in details of sensory and description like no other author I've read. If there is a texture to be felt, the reader feels it. If there is an aroma to be smelled, the reader smells it. If there is a color to be seen, the reader sees it. And in the same way her words come to life on the written page, her message of faith in an all-loving God will come to life in the reader's soul. Shadow of the Storm is biblical fiction at it's best. Highly, HIGHLY recommend.
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Author 4 books1,708 followers
January 8, 2018
How do I sum up my thoughts on this book? Contention. Family melodrama. Love triangle. Fear. Forgiveness. Love. Family. Faith. Courage. God's plans. So many wonderful and not-so-wonderful themes. The author did a magnificent job of taking this mishmash of themes and stirring them into beautiful dyes with which to paint her story.

The thing that bugged me the most in this story was how drastically different Shira's mom was in this story than she was in the first book. In book one, she was a tender-hearted woman who easily shared her compassion with the people around her. In book two (this one), she was callous and harsh to her own daughter. I found it difficult to make the different presentations of her come together into the same person. I was happy, though, to see glimpses of the caring woman I'd come to cherish (in book one) in the final chapters of this book.

I'm not a fan of the love triangle, though it can be done well. This one missed the mark on that angle, for me, because Dvorah was despicable. I'm not sure anyone would root for her to win Ayal's heart, so it didn't make the whole love triangle thing plausible. That was one of my biggest struggles with this book, actually.

Another struggle for me was the sexual innuendo threaded throughout. Most of the time it was lightly hinted at, which seemed to work since it was in jest between sisters in their eagerness and excitement for marriage and babies and family. I understand that. However, there were moments that went much deeper, particularly where Dvorah was concerned. I really could not stand her throughout... until the final couple of chapters.

Those final five or so chapters lifted my rating from a three-star to a four-star. The way Ms. Cossette tied up all the loose ends, weaving together such a beautiful tapestry of God's grace and forgiveness and mercy and gorgeous ways of working in peoples' lives made the whole journey of this book completely worth reading.

What impressed me the most, other than what I just said about the final chapters, was how Ms. Cossette handled the topics of rape, prostitution, and bullying with such a tender hand. She kept the actual rape scenes off-page, which I absolutely appreciated, yet the emotions the characters felt easily dripped from each word plugged into those devastating scenes. I cannot imagine those moments being written in a more beautiful way.

I said something similar to this about her first book, Counted with the Stars, but it definitely bears repeating: Ms. Cossette is a master wordsmith who is bound to stick around for a long time. She's my favorite biblical fiction author, and that's a ginormous compliment, as I am extremely picky about this genre and have only found three books (including two of hers) so far that I have enjoyed. I greatly prefer story lines that feature fictional characters rather than straight-from-the-Bible characters, because ones that feature the latter often are riddled with wild inconsistencies from the biblical account. Though there may be a few minor inconsistencies in Ms. Cossette's stories when compared to the Bible accounts of the same stories, these haven't bothered me as much since her lead characters are completely fictional and because it's perfectly clear by her author notes that her heart is to share the stories to inspire people to do their own research into the Word of God. That is such an admirable trait, and it's one I hope to emulate in my own writing, though the genres I write are so different from that of Ms. Cossette's specialty.

I have one more book in this Out of Egypt trilogy to read, and I'm really looking forward to it. It's going to be bittersweet, because I don't want to say goodbye to these characters and their journeys. But I'll be able to revisit them whenever I want, because I own a copy of the books. That's a definite plus.

And I'm really looking forward to her newest book, which comes out later in 2018.

Content:
* nudity associated with midwifery and childbirth
* sexual innuendo
* alcohol
* idol worship
* bribing children so they do what the adults want them to do

I was not compensated for my honest review.
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353 reviews42 followers
November 15, 2016
I was really excited to get the opportunity to continue following the Hebrews journey out of captivity and this book didn't disappoint. The thing that makes this story so interesting (besides the fact that Connilynn Cossette is such an awesome writer!) is that it brings to life the possibilities of what life was like after the Hebrews left Egypt. The fact that it wasn't just Hebrews was also interesting to me. It wasn't an easy journey and there were no perfect people. But where there is sin and corruption and abuse, there is also redemption, repentance, and healing.

In this book we get to read Shira's story. With an outward strength and compassion for others, Shira has come through slavery and an attack that stole her innocence and her future. But inwardly she still struggles and mourns the things that cannot be. Her struggle with the calling of being a midwife brings to life the heartbreak of her past as well the hope of a future that she wasn't sure was possible. It also brings her into direct contact with a woman who will do anything to avenge the death of her husband at the hands of Shira's people, the Levites. Good and bad, life and death, hope and despair - what will win in the lives of these two women and their families?

As for the hero, I was a little conflicted about him. His actions cause grief for Shira that follow them for a while including affecting the way his family treats Shira. Nevertheless, once he seeks forgiveness, he becomes the man of God that Shira needs. Will she open her heart to him after his betrayal?

It was good to read more about Kiya, Eben, and Jumo. Jumo's miraculous healing continues to be a source of wonder and joy for their families and Kiya and Eben are happily married even though Kiya still faces some prejudice from some of the Hebrews. Kiya and Shira continue to grow closer and Kiya is a source of strength for Shira in the tumultuous days to come.

With great depth and dramatic twists, the author tells the hopeful story of a journey to freedom, the lessons learned along the way, and the turning of a nation to the one true God who delivered them. You won't want to miss this 2nd book in the Out From Egypt series!

*Thanks to the author & Bethany House Publishers for a complimentary copy of this book. I was not paid or required to write a positive review and all opinions stated are my own.*
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138 reviews
October 8, 2019
I was obsessed with this series before it even released and it has lived up to my expectations. The writing is evocative and pulls you to the base of Mt. Sinai. The research Cossette puts into each story is apparent and the characters are so easy to care about.

Living in the Shadow of God’s glory, Shira is trying to find her place in this new life. Longing for a family of her own, she finds contentment in her new calling as a midwife. With tendrils of disquiet winding through the camp, Shira fights to hold on the broken pieces of her life. Will she have the strength to turn them over to the Lord?

Shira was a favorite character since first meeting her in Counted With the Stars and I was so excited to finally unravel some of the hinted threads of her story. She has such a quiet strength, although she does not believe it of herself, and her struggle to navigate the new circumstances she finds herself in are captivating.

I’m eagerly awaiting the conclusion to this series so I can meet Alanah the Canaanite and Tobiah the Hebrew warrior. I can’t wait to read what’s next from this author.

*I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own. *
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Author 6 books105 followers
December 29, 2016
Such a wonderful follow up to Counted With the Stars!

Shadow of the Storm is biblical fiction at its best. Beautiful prose and tight storytelling weave together into an unforgettable tale of a brave young woman and those who love her--especially the God who calls her by name.

I was thrilled the author wove the main characters from Counted with the Stars into Shira's story, using the background of the Hebrews' exodus from Egypt as framework. Her details about life at that turning point in the Israelites' history are fascinating and breathe an already page-turning story with even more life.

Main character Shira is small and strong, a humble young woman with hidden hurts and a steady hand. When she's unexpectedly pulled into helping a midwife deliver a baby, it begins a journey in her heart and life that forever changes her.

Shadow of the Storm is the perfect mix of deep characterization, historical details, tense action, sweet romance, and plot twists. Threads of redemption and forgiveness resonate, too.

I highly recommend Shadow of the Storm for fans of biblical fiction and historical romance. I'm so eager to read book three (due in a few *long* months!).
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August 28, 2024
Shadow of the Storm by Connilynn Cossette
Time Frame: Time of Moses, 4-17 months after exodus from Egypt
Location: Mostly at the foot of Mt. Sinai
Main Characters:
Shira: Single Hebrew, ex-slave, left Egypt with family
Ayal: New man in the picture
Dvorah: Female antagonist, co-midwife apprentice
Hassam: Male antagonist, Dvorah's brother-in-law
Kiya: From the first book, married Shira's brother Eben
Reva: Midwife training Shira

This was a fictional story taking place after Moses led the Israelites out of Egypt (reference Exodus 19 through Numbers 11). It's about Shira, a returning character in the first book, Counted with the Stars. There are two alternating voices: Shira, sweet and innocent, in contrast with Dvorah, half Egyptian, half Levite woman who seems to despise everyone.

Synopsis:



This is the second book in the series and the second book I've read by Connilynn Cossette. I liked the first book, but I really enjoyed this one. Ms. Cossette changes the way the reader feels about some characters, and it was creative. You really like one, then they're scum, then there's redemption...or you simply think there's nothing redeeming about one character only to feel fairly empathetic toward them later. It was quite a fun little roller coaster.

The biblical history blended into the story was insightful and well done. I never considered the "mixed multitude" that went out of Egypt with Moses mentioned in Exodus 12:38. In my mind, it was just Hebrews. But surely other races intermarried with Israelites during all those years they were under Pharaoh. It stands to reason that it was more than just Hebrews traveling together all those years, although Exodus doesn't mention who they are. That might account for all the murmurings and need for idols, and mistrust in Yahweh. Anyway, the book brings all that in and creates a captivating story.

A solid 5 stars for me.
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February 26, 2023
~Dnf about halfway through~

I just can't handle all the drama and I don't like the turn the romance took. I read far enough to know why certain characters did certain things, but it still ruined the story for me.
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July 26, 2022
This book made me think about how the Israelites experienced their exodus and stay in the desert after years of slavery in Egypt. That is one reason I enjoy Biblical fiction - though fictional, the author helps me bring colour to a well known story.

I enjoyed the different characters’ POV and the growth Shira went through, overcoming her past and experiencing God’s forgiveness and redemption.

*I listened to the audiobook on Scribd.*
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August 8, 2022
This one is hard to rate. It was very well written and lots of faith, but I just wasn't that into the story line. I was a lot more interested in book 1. I did enjoy the ending a lot though.
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November 3, 2021
Consistently, I am amazed by Connilyn’s ability to write a multi-layered story!

Once again, I was captivated by the character development all while accompanied with strong underlying Biblical messages.

Shira and Ayal’s love story was very unique and had me guessing from their very first interaction.
I was getting really upset there for awhile and was not liking the story at all because I was getting so stressed!! — but it got really good…and sweet! Thankfully, I didn’t give in to my stress and continued on so I could allay my anxiety 😉. I really appreciate that Connilyn never leaves you in a stressful tumble of emotions for too long. She doesn’t drag out a frustrating storyline for too long... 😮‍💨 Phew!

Another awesome book … onto the next in the series! 💜
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83 reviews10 followers
July 8, 2022
Solid 4 ✨

Overall I really enjoyed this (to the point of staying up until 2AM reading 🤭) but not as much as the first one. I did have my doubts about this book just based on the fact that Shira seems like a perfect side character and not a protagonist but though it wasn’t as great as Kiya’s journey, it was still a pretty good story! One of the things I loved about the first book was that it seemed to focus more on Kiya coming into a relationship with God as opposed to just making it all about her and Eben… this was where this story fell short for me. Though I genuinely love me some romance, I must say that I really wish Shira and Ayal’s story would’ve taken more of a backseat in the overall plot. Reading this (at times) felt like just a romance novel instead of what I had hoped it would be a story about one woman’s journey into accepting her life’s calling and the inner healing that God had for her. Maybe I’m being harsh in my criticism but I could’ve done without all the little insinuations by Ayal towards Shira (although no boundaries were ever crossed, I still felt like I would’ve preferred a sweeter/slow burn romance especially given her past trauma with intimacy…)

Now on to the highlights: Please don’t think I’m being hateful when I say this BUT I’m so so glad that Shira was not miraculously healed from being barren. And it’s not because I hate happy endings but rather because this highlights the fact that sometimes God’s blessings come in unexpected and (dare I say) perhaps even unwanted packages. Growth happens when we submit to Gods will though it be hard and within time we oftentimes find that the thing we tried to run from maybe be one of the biggest blessings in our lives! I loved how Shira’s story portrays God’s redemptive power even in spite of our brokenness and trauma! Also it depicts the reality of life…that being a Christ follower does not exempt us from suffering. In addition I also liked how through Shira we see that our disobedience brings unpleasant outcomes. God will always, without a doubt, forgive our mistakes. But as to the consequences of our actions, sometimes we are led to deal with them in spite of how painful they may be. Her story served as a reminder of this. Finally I enjoyed reading about the final resolution between Shira and Dvorah and how despite the tremendous amount of pain she caused, Shira had the strength to forgive and accept her even into her own family. Dvorah’s story shows us that well known phrase: hurt people, hurt people. If only we would all come to a revelation of this in our lives as Shira did, the church (and even our world) would be a much safer place 💕




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329 reviews125 followers
November 3, 2022
reread 2022

This is the third time I've read Shira's story so I thought it was about time to share my thoughts on it. Overall, it's my least favourite of Connilyn's books mainly because Shira is so different from the first and third book. In those books, she is portrayed as a woman who's overcome a lot and still retains her bright and shining spirit, always singing and full of wisdom and caring. In her own story, her character feels depressed nearly all the time.

For those who are squeamish, Shira's occupation is midwifery. Nothing is detailed, but that's up to your discretion. Additionally, there is a rape scene. Normally I would hide this under spoilers but I do feel readers should be aware of a scene of this nature. Again, not graphic, and it stops just before it goes 'too far', but some - like myself - might feel even reading this scene goes too far. If you want to read the book and skip this scene, it's in chapter 37 from pages 245-249.

One last note: this book also features cheating/adultery.

I loved the descriptions of building the tabernacle and the culture of the time. It's incredible how much detail and thought went into building it, and all this given through Moses by God. This is why I enjoy biblical fiction; there's so much to learn that comes to life if written well.

Not a bad book, just not my favourite.
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Author 4 books76 followers
November 14, 2016
Why I Choose this Book:

I read the first book in the series back in May and really enjoyed it. When I saw the second book was coming out, I jumped at the chance to read it, too.

What I Thought About this Book:

The book had so many beautiful descriptions in it. I savored the words and flew right into the world they were portraying. I was stuck between wanting to read the book as fast as possible to find out what happened next, and to slow down and drink in the way the words swirled together.

I also found the first third of the storyline to be fantastically gripping. Then came a plot twist I had 100% not expected. The plot twist nearly made me drop the book. It was crazy. It's probably my lack of mercy, but I had a really hard time with how the main character dealt with what happened. I won't say more because of spoilers, ya know, but I'm still not sure I feel like it was adequately addressed in the rest of the book. That's what took the book from a very solid four stars down to three stars.

There was also a fair bit more romance in this book than I remember being in the first book, which also took the book down a little bit for me.

Conclusion:

All in all though, Shadow of the Storm was compelling, beautiful, and really helped the Exodus from Egypt come alive for me. Miss Connilyn does a fantastic job of skillfully weaving her words together and I look forward to reading the third book when it's published.

Rating:

I'm giving Shadow of the Storm 3 out of 5 stars and 6 out of 10.

*I received this book free from Bethany House Publishing*
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201 reviews
April 22, 2017
What a great sequel to Counted With the Stars!

I was really excited to read this one, because Shira was my favorite character from the first book. I couldn't wait to read more about her, as this installment is centered on her story. And what a great story that is!
I always appreciate the first person narrative as it makes the reader feel the story in a special way. This book was narrated by two characters: Shira and Dvorah. Dvorah's point of view was special as she gave the reader insights as to out members of the other nations might have been feeling seen everything that was happening.

I loved all the references to the first book and getting to see Kiya continue to grow in her faith.
On a few occasion, during the first half of the book I wanted to yell at both Shira and Ayal though as their lack of communication jeopardized their relationship on more than one occasion. I couldn't wait for them to finally be honest with themselves and each other, but that's probably that only negative element. :D

Although I really liked Counted with the Stars, I think this one was even better!
Highly recommended book! I am really looking forward to the next book in the series!

Thanks to the author for providing me a copy of the book. It did not affect my review.
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1,599 reviews77 followers
May 21, 2017
The Hebrews are camped at the foot of Mount Sinai learning the laws of Yahweh and and adjusting to becoming a nation. There is lots of strife in the camp between the various tribes and particularly against the foreigners that have joined forces with the Children of Israel. Some are are true followers of Yahweh while others are there for devious purposes.

On a more personal level, Shira, a young Hebrew woman, has her own struggles to face. Her mother wants her to follow her family's traditions of becoming a weaver but Shira has no aptitude in that direction. Instead she longs to be trained as a future midwife. Going against her mother's wishes she becomes an apprentice. When a woman dies under her care Shira becomes discouraged and returns to weaving. Will she find healing from the wounds of her past and fulfill the calling that Yahweh has placed on her life?

This is a delightful story that has obviously been well researched. Life in the Hebrew camp became real to me and I enjoyed becoming acquainted with the various characters in this book.
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1,881 reviews53 followers
September 20, 2016
I read a lot of books. It is not always that I love a book anymore. I really, really loved this book. The depth of the writing reminded me of a mix of Mesu Andrews and Tessa Ashfar combined with her own twist on it.

I am generally very, very critical of midwifery scenes in books. In this one, a woman that has never given birth, managed to describe the feelings of someone that was an assistant so well. I have assisted and been a doula at many births, am the daughter of a midwife and I felt like I was in the birthing room with Shira. I felt her pain and the healing as she became a strong woman. It was amazing.

This is the second book in the series and you will want to read the previous one before this one. Shadow of the storm is released Oct. 18th, so go and pre-order it along with the first one so you are ready when it comes.
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475 reviews90 followers
November 1, 2022
I initially rated this 5 stars (back when I rated basically everything 5 stars), but upon a re-read it's definitely 4 stars for me. This story is beautifully-written and just as powerful as when I first read it, but there's a trope that plays a huge part of the story that I really do NOT like. Besides that and the romance being slightly eye roll-worthy, this book is great and features one of my favourite things in books, midwifery!
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431 reviews20 followers
October 29, 2016
Love, Love, Loved this book!!! What a great "biblical fiction" book! Set in the wilderness after the Hebrews left Egypt, this is such a great story of how fickle they were then (like we are now) in our faith in God. Can't wait for the next book!!!!
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