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393 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 2, 2016
Don't get me wrong, it was still a good book! There were these moments (2 of them to be exact) when it was so good I wanted to slap that 5 star on the cover. And then Zep would talk. And talk. And talk.
All the talk about feelings and personal situations. The giggling *gah! Oh, and how to mount a horse (very detailed... and long). And poor LT never got his sex scene. His just faded out. All these things made the story fall flat. I wanted more missions, world building, and character building (because honestly everyone acted/talked like a girl).I have several books of this series and I plan on continuing. Hopefully, Hadley's writing style improves. She's got something really good there!