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Rose Cottage: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Thomas Bennet is dead, and the lives of his wife and daughters will forever change. Their worst fears are realized as they must leave their beloved Longbourn to face an uncertain future.
Elizabeth Bennet faces the a bleak future. It is clear that her mother will never be equal to the tasks of managing the meager finances, planning for the move, or giving guidance and love to her youngest daughters. Elizabeth can expect life as a spinster, caring for the family and finally being left alone to tend Fanny Bennet.
Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives at Netherfield on the very eve of the funeral, after a letter is misdirected. He throws himself into the repair work on the Bennets’ cottage, pouring into it all his unrequited love for Elizabeth. Although she may not belong to him, he quickly realizes that he belongs to her—and that he always will.
Love grows with the advancing spring, just as surely as the lovely old roses begin to grow at the derelict cottage. As a new haven for the Bennets begins to emerge from the ruins, Elizabeth and Darcy find themselves likewise giving their love a new, second chance. When an unseen and powerful opponent seeks to block their marriage, Elizabeth and Darcy will fight for their freedom to live together in peace.
Please note: This story includes two scenes of non-graphic violence. It also incorporates a love scene between the newly married couple in which author and readers will close the door and tiptoe away. It is best suited for readers in the late teens and up.
Elizabeth Bennet faces the a bleak future. It is clear that her mother will never be equal to the tasks of managing the meager finances, planning for the move, or giving guidance and love to her youngest daughters. Elizabeth can expect life as a spinster, caring for the family and finally being left alone to tend Fanny Bennet.
Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives at Netherfield on the very eve of the funeral, after a letter is misdirected. He throws himself into the repair work on the Bennets’ cottage, pouring into it all his unrequited love for Elizabeth. Although she may not belong to him, he quickly realizes that he belongs to her—and that he always will.
Love grows with the advancing spring, just as surely as the lovely old roses begin to grow at the derelict cottage. As a new haven for the Bennets begins to emerge from the ruins, Elizabeth and Darcy find themselves likewise giving their love a new, second chance. When an unseen and powerful opponent seeks to block their marriage, Elizabeth and Darcy will fight for their freedom to live together in peace.
Please note: This story includes two scenes of non-graphic violence. It also incorporates a love scene between the newly married couple in which author and readers will close the door and tiptoe away. It is best suited for readers in the late teens and up.
246 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 27, 2020
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July 17, 2020
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
June 30, 2020
A garden is always a series of losses set against a few triumphs, like life itself. ~ May Sarton
Who knew Mrs. Bennet was an avid gardener, knowledgeable in all aspects of growing green things?
What a very good thing for Mrs. Bennet in her greatest loss: the death of her husband.
Jane is married to Bingley as the story begins and Mr. Bennet has died unexpectedly. Bingley purchased Netherfield Park and had intended to repair and refurbish the dower house there for Mrs. Bennet. Now, suddenly, the need is immediate.
A post-Hunsford Darcy comes to Meryton with his experience in building and maintaining. His gardener arrives and Mrs. Bennet is able to emerge from her room to begin planning the renovation of the neglected garden at Netherfield Dower House.
This is an improved Mother Bennet, who relies on Elizabeth for support and occasionally chastises her youngest and favorite daughter. She insists on mourning behavior and does not allow Lydia to abuse her trust.
The hum of bees is the voice of the garden. ~ Elizabeth Lawrence
In every garden, invaders appear: weeds, some of them noxious!
The noxious weed in this book is the not-so-good Reverend Collins. Eventually, someone (an unusual and surprising savior) will have to apply a hoe (and maybe pesticide) to remove him.
I always like a “Papa Bennet dies” story where Mama Bennet actually grieves for her husband. She is realistic about what her marriage had been and regrets her mistakes – very refreshing after all the “Crazy Mama Bennet” stories.
There is some violence in the story but it is not overblown and is necessary to the plot.
This is the first published book for this author. Information at the book’s end shows she has several other stories being prepared to be published. I, for one, will be watching for them.
I say, if your knees aren't green by the end of the day, you ought to seriously re-examine your life. ~ Bill Watterson
Who knew Mrs. Bennet was an avid gardener, knowledgeable in all aspects of growing green things?
What a very good thing for Mrs. Bennet in her greatest loss: the death of her husband.
Jane is married to Bingley as the story begins and Mr. Bennet has died unexpectedly. Bingley purchased Netherfield Park and had intended to repair and refurbish the dower house there for Mrs. Bennet. Now, suddenly, the need is immediate.
A post-Hunsford Darcy comes to Meryton with his experience in building and maintaining. His gardener arrives and Mrs. Bennet is able to emerge from her room to begin planning the renovation of the neglected garden at Netherfield Dower House.
This is an improved Mother Bennet, who relies on Elizabeth for support and occasionally chastises her youngest and favorite daughter. She insists on mourning behavior and does not allow Lydia to abuse her trust.
The hum of bees is the voice of the garden. ~ Elizabeth Lawrence
In every garden, invaders appear: weeds, some of them noxious!
The noxious weed in this book is the not-so-good Reverend Collins. Eventually, someone (an unusual and surprising savior) will have to apply a hoe (and maybe pesticide) to remove him.
I always like a “Papa Bennet dies” story where Mama Bennet actually grieves for her husband. She is realistic about what her marriage had been and regrets her mistakes – very refreshing after all the “Crazy Mama Bennet” stories.
There is some violence in the story but it is not overblown and is necessary to the plot.
This is the first published book for this author. Information at the book’s end shows she has several other stories being prepared to be published. I, for one, will be watching for them.
I say, if your knees aren't green by the end of the day, you ought to seriously re-examine your life. ~ Bill Watterson
July 5, 2020
Okay read
There are things I liked about the story and some parts I didnt quite get. First the story started off pretty slow , but eventually found a good pace. There were a few things I has a hard time wrapping my head around while I was reading
1) I kept asking myself when was Darcy going to man up and confront Collins? Collins would insult Lizzy and Darcy would tell Lizzy not to worry. Later Collins insults Lizzy and put his hands on Lizzy and Darcy just tells her not to worry. Collins confront his future bride's family and insults them and once again Darcy tells Lizzy not to worry. Finally Wickham stepped in and did to Collins what Darcy should have done. My opinion of Darcy went down and my view of Wickham went up a notch.
2) Once again Darcy has me confused. Darcy know Caroline is not only trying to break up his engagement to Elizabeth, but also knows that she is willing to wait for his cousin Anne to die so she can marry him. He knows Caroline despises Elizabeth as well, but you allow her to come to you're wedding and even sleep in the same house with her.
3) The book is called Rose Cottage, but the Cottage seemed like an afterthought. It could have easily been called Nethefield. The way the story started off, with the Cottage being repaired and all the treasures that was found that belonged to the cottage, I was thinking that widow Mrs. Bennett would be the toast of the town showing off her expensive furnishings and large rooms, but nothing came of the cottage. They spent more time outside the cottage, but more so at Netherfield. I didn't understand why the story went into so much detail of the repairs and hidden gems of it wasn't going to play a part in the storyline.
Those are things that I was questioning throughout the story. Now what I did like...
1) I thought the way Darcy and Elizabeth came together because of the cottage repair was original. I haven't seem it before.
2) I like P&Ps where I don't have to wait to the very end for Darcy and Elizabeth to be together.
3) I LOVE that those annoying misunderstandings was slim (that alone will make me read another one of her books.)
4) I'm not a big fan of angst, but I find it easier to sit through when Darcy and Elizabeth are already a couple working things out together, instead of Elizabeth believing every negative thing concerning Darcy whispered in her ear.I
So there you have it. I would say give it a read and see if it's to your liking. My nitpicking is my take. Like I said I will read another story from this author. Not every author is knocks it out of the park with every book.
There are things I liked about the story and some parts I didnt quite get. First the story started off pretty slow , but eventually found a good pace. There were a few things I has a hard time wrapping my head around while I was reading
1) I kept asking myself when was Darcy going to man up and confront Collins? Collins would insult Lizzy and Darcy would tell Lizzy not to worry. Later Collins insults Lizzy and put his hands on Lizzy and Darcy just tells her not to worry. Collins confront his future bride's family and insults them and once again Darcy tells Lizzy not to worry. Finally Wickham stepped in and did to Collins what Darcy should have done. My opinion of Darcy went down and my view of Wickham went up a notch.
2) Once again Darcy has me confused. Darcy know Caroline is not only trying to break up his engagement to Elizabeth, but also knows that she is willing to wait for his cousin Anne to die so she can marry him. He knows Caroline despises Elizabeth as well, but you allow her to come to you're wedding and even sleep in the same house with her.
3) The book is called Rose Cottage, but the Cottage seemed like an afterthought. It could have easily been called Nethefield. The way the story started off, with the Cottage being repaired and all the treasures that was found that belonged to the cottage, I was thinking that widow Mrs. Bennett would be the toast of the town showing off her expensive furnishings and large rooms, but nothing came of the cottage. They spent more time outside the cottage, but more so at Netherfield. I didn't understand why the story went into so much detail of the repairs and hidden gems of it wasn't going to play a part in the storyline.
Those are things that I was questioning throughout the story. Now what I did like...
1) I thought the way Darcy and Elizabeth came together because of the cottage repair was original. I haven't seem it before.
2) I like P&Ps where I don't have to wait to the very end for Darcy and Elizabeth to be together.
3) I LOVE that those annoying misunderstandings was slim (that alone will make me read another one of her books.)
4) I'm not a big fan of angst, but I find it easier to sit through when Darcy and Elizabeth are already a couple working things out together, instead of Elizabeth believing every negative thing concerning Darcy whispered in her ear.I
So there you have it. I would say give it a read and see if it's to your liking. My nitpicking is my take. Like I said I will read another story from this author. Not every author is knocks it out of the park with every book.
June 28, 2020
In this book, Darcy did not give Lizzy his letter following his proposal, Bingley returned for Jane and Lydia did not elope with Wickham. The first time Darcy and Lizzy meet again is when he arrives at Netherfield on the eve of Mr Bennets funeral, determined to support the remaining Bennets as the are forced out of Longbourn. Interestingly, Darcy and Lizzy come to know and appreciate each other very quickly... but the path to true love doesn't run completely smoothly. Lady Catherine is determined the marriage will never happen and goes to some extreme lengths to achieve this. Caroline Bingley is determined to get her claws into Darcy and isn't going to let him go easily.
This is quite a long book - a lot happens. Poor old Lizzy has a target on her back from the beginning. Wickham takes a different role which I quite liked. There is a real unexpected villain in this piece and I thoroughly enjoyed disliking him. Its lovely to see the growing relationship between Darcy & Elizabeth and the reader gets to spend lots of time with them. Mrs Bennet gets a story of her own as does Mary. Poor Charlotte has a hard time too... probably harder than she deserved.
There were a couple of little niggles for me. There is quite a bit of repetition - something will happen which the reader is aware of, then the incident gets repeated as the story is retold to other characters. I don't think the future of Longbourn gets properly explained in the end... unless I missed it. But the biggest complaint is the issue central to the whole plot... the mourning period. Elizabeth's betrothal and marriage all happen within weeks of Mr Bennets demise. Other marriages happen in this period too.... including one that definately should not have happened in that mourning period. The author seems to deal with this in a discussion about wedding clothes by saying that 'there is no proper custom' for daughters in mourning. This excuse is used to purchase wedding clothes for the bride and bridesmaids that aren't mourning clothes. It's almost as though the mourning period is too inconvenient for the story, so it's just ignored... but mentioned when it involves other characters... like Lydia not being allowed to invite the Officers for tea... but Lizzy can get married.... we should be buying wedding clothes that are also mourning clothes... but it's a waste of money so we won't! I completely understand the timeline and how everything that happens just wouldn't work with a lengthy mourning period... but my understanding is that periods of mourning were pretty strict and the expectation was it should be observed by all family members.... I almost think it would have been better to just pretend the mourning period didnt exist rather than try and justify why it doesn't apply.
Overall though, I really enjoyed this book and read it in one sitting. We get lots of time with Darcy and Elizabeth and there are some real dastardly villains!! Its always nice to have a book by a new author!
This is quite a long book - a lot happens. Poor old Lizzy has a target on her back from the beginning. Wickham takes a different role which I quite liked. There is a real unexpected villain in this piece and I thoroughly enjoyed disliking him. Its lovely to see the growing relationship between Darcy & Elizabeth and the reader gets to spend lots of time with them. Mrs Bennet gets a story of her own as does Mary. Poor Charlotte has a hard time too... probably harder than she deserved.
There were a couple of little niggles for me. There is quite a bit of repetition - something will happen which the reader is aware of, then the incident gets repeated as the story is retold to other characters. I don't think the future of Longbourn gets properly explained in the end... unless I missed it. But the biggest complaint is the issue central to the whole plot... the mourning period. Elizabeth's betrothal and marriage all happen within weeks of Mr Bennets demise. Other marriages happen in this period too.... including one that definately should not have happened in that mourning period. The author seems to deal with this in a discussion about wedding clothes by saying that 'there is no proper custom' for daughters in mourning. This excuse is used to purchase wedding clothes for the bride and bridesmaids that aren't mourning clothes. It's almost as though the mourning period is too inconvenient for the story, so it's just ignored... but mentioned when it involves other characters... like Lydia not being allowed to invite the Officers for tea... but Lizzy can get married.... we should be buying wedding clothes that are also mourning clothes... but it's a waste of money so we won't! I completely understand the timeline and how everything that happens just wouldn't work with a lengthy mourning period... but my understanding is that periods of mourning were pretty strict and the expectation was it should be observed by all family members.... I almost think it would have been better to just pretend the mourning period didnt exist rather than try and justify why it doesn't apply.
Overall though, I really enjoyed this book and read it in one sitting. We get lots of time with Darcy and Elizabeth and there are some real dastardly villains!! Its always nice to have a book by a new author!
August 11, 2023
This story had a little bit of everything. Low key to high emotions, slow paced to high drama and a collection of well rounded characters (Hello Mrs. Bennet!)
Even the loving between E and D was set very naturally-no overdone smut or sweet. Definitely worth the read!
Even the loving between E and D was set very naturally-no overdone smut or sweet. Definitely worth the read!
May 26, 2022
“Pleasant” is the best word to describe this debut novel. It was a three bears novel, right in the middle in all aspects. Middling angst, moderate pace, average in many technical aspects—in a good way.
My review will be about the latter measure, so will have little subjective matter. Instead, it will focus on those technical details forgotten by most reviewers that can make or break a star rating for a reader. Of those, the author loses .5 stars.
The concept for the story is a wider, general plot bunny enlarged into a gentle tale that’s told in a complete story arc with very little for side plots, and those are minimized and add interest to the tale.
Pacing was moderate and even slower at times, but this didn’t necessarily indicate a lack of interesting themes within the story. Physical action scenes were few in the book; instead, the action came from dialogue. A point in the book upped the angst with a trigger scene, and there, the pace was also upped quite dramatically. The scene was well done and tasteful while generating the appropriate sensations for the reader at that point in the story without anything explicit.
Language was fairly good for the Regency; however, I had to cringe at a sprinkling of modern expressions that were used for the most part earlier in the novel. “Sense of unreality,” “burn it off,” “cautiously optimistic,” “organized chaos,” “spontaneously combust,” “in the language of his people,” “gave himself a mental shake,” “covered a great deal of ground,” and “companionable silence” are some I picked up. One difficult word was noted on several occasions: the antiquated “betimes” had to be looked up, and it’s actually quite a clever use of a word. Non-Regency words and phrases or uses of words and phrases in a non-Regency application included “chimed in,” empathy, normal, “about-face,” share, staff, assess, gotten, “wedding breakfast,” interaction, and décolletage. This is a slightly long list given the length of the book. The author sometimes used “we will” and “I will” where the character being British would have said “we shall” or “I shall,” yet sometimes got it right. Contractions were used a couple of times by upper class characters, indicating subtle errors that were missed in editing.
A few punctuation mark errors got past the editors: some missing quotation marks, and in other locations, quotation marks that did not belong. In one location, a period was used instead of a question mark, and I saw a couple locations where a comma was deserved. Date formats were American, including in British letters.
A few Regency errors were made. In no situation would a lady go out of doors without donning her gloves. Luncheon was a new concept in the Regency and was a hand-held meal, not a sit-down affair. Dinner was at about 4 or 5pm and would never be a feast of cold meats. Even a small dinner would be a “single course” that would be enough to stuff the heartiest of modern-day eaters. Chaperons were for courting couples. Once betrothed, none were needed any longer since the legal implications bound the two together and there was no chance of one trapping the other into marriage any longer. A stove in a kitchen was a relatively new thing and was uncommon in Regency homes, therefore it would not be waited for since most meals would be cooked over the kitchen hearth. Canada was not a country until 1867. Prior to that, it was a group of separate colonies, each with their own name, none of which was Canada—Upper Canada and Lower Canada existed, but each of those names is what they were called at the time, or “The Canadas.”
A general scene-setting error was made regarding the sensual implement of feeding each other grapes. The story is set in spring time. Where were they getting their grapes? Do not say a hothouse. When it is easy to grow grapes out of doors, no one would think to use valuable hothouse space for them. Otherwise, scene setting was lovely, using all the senses.
Characterization was good, if a little uneven. Darcy was more romantic in this book compared to most JAFF, though he wasn’t a mooncalf either. He courted Elizabeth in his own way, which was true to character in canon. But he lacked the personal responsibility he had in canon by letting Wickham go with someone else supervising. Elizabeth was not your JAFF Mary Sue, but she was Team Darcy too easily early on, yet it lacked heat. If I was Team Darcy, I’d have a little more passion. Her negative response to the trauma of the assault didn’t last long, which is unrealistic. Mr. Collins was an over-the-top villain. In my opinion, it worked—just barely. To have Wickham as a quasi-hero yet still a bad boy takes good writing, and it was done well. Mrs. Bennet having an even character was a little jarring. It begged the question—Why? Similarly, non-canon Lydia and Kitty were smooth, merely to make the story easier. Not easier to swallow, though.
The point of view was not consistent, as there was head-hopping and instances where the POV character could “see” that her own eyes were enormous and her complexion was pale.
The author could have changed filter words to make the novel tighter for the enjoyment of the reader. Show, don’t tell is not always known by a first time author, though.
As noted earlier, the story varies in angst, and it’s mostly relatively low until the violent scene near the end of the book, where it ramps up to high angst rather quickly. Fortunately, it’s short lived and settles to moderate just as fast. The whole scene is very well done, without any unnecessary detail.
As far as the development of the romance goes, the rate was moderate just like every other part of the book. That’s the reason I was surprised at the engagement at 40% into the book. Elizabeth wasn’t ready as far as my gut instinct went, and the author pushed her into love at the last minute. I felt that she liked Darcy, but there was no passion between them at that point. Passion does develop by the time they’re married, and a steamy non-sexual scene leads to an off-camera wedding night much later in the book.
The final chapter is what many would use as an epilogue, since it’s set a year and then several years in advance, which would benefit from a scene change marker. I suppose that by making it a chapter, the author pleases both fans of epilogues and those who don’t like them. In any case, it tied up loose ends and introduced some concepts that were on the fringes of the story that made for nice little ending vignettes.
The cover is beautiful, and its bright colours, excellent balance and fonts, and uniqueness should attract readers. It tells a little of the story inside as well.
I got a great deal of enjoyment out of reading Rose Cottage, which was a sweet (not in that stupid way they classify books, but in the old-fashioned word way), well-contrived novel that kept the reader happily looking forward to the next chapter. I would recommend it as a worthwhile read, and I look forward to reading more books by A.K. Madison.
Disclaimer: I’m a JAFF author, and some might say this review is a conflict of interest. I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for both the reader and the author.
My review will be about the latter measure, so will have little subjective matter. Instead, it will focus on those technical details forgotten by most reviewers that can make or break a star rating for a reader. Of those, the author loses .5 stars.
The concept for the story is a wider, general plot bunny enlarged into a gentle tale that’s told in a complete story arc with very little for side plots, and those are minimized and add interest to the tale.
Pacing was moderate and even slower at times, but this didn’t necessarily indicate a lack of interesting themes within the story. Physical action scenes were few in the book; instead, the action came from dialogue. A point in the book upped the angst with a trigger scene, and there, the pace was also upped quite dramatically. The scene was well done and tasteful while generating the appropriate sensations for the reader at that point in the story without anything explicit.
Language was fairly good for the Regency; however, I had to cringe at a sprinkling of modern expressions that were used for the most part earlier in the novel. “Sense of unreality,” “burn it off,” “cautiously optimistic,” “organized chaos,” “spontaneously combust,” “in the language of his people,” “gave himself a mental shake,” “covered a great deal of ground,” and “companionable silence” are some I picked up. One difficult word was noted on several occasions: the antiquated “betimes” had to be looked up, and it’s actually quite a clever use of a word. Non-Regency words and phrases or uses of words and phrases in a non-Regency application included “chimed in,” empathy, normal, “about-face,” share, staff, assess, gotten, “wedding breakfast,” interaction, and décolletage. This is a slightly long list given the length of the book. The author sometimes used “we will” and “I will” where the character being British would have said “we shall” or “I shall,” yet sometimes got it right. Contractions were used a couple of times by upper class characters, indicating subtle errors that were missed in editing.
A few punctuation mark errors got past the editors: some missing quotation marks, and in other locations, quotation marks that did not belong. In one location, a period was used instead of a question mark, and I saw a couple locations where a comma was deserved. Date formats were American, including in British letters.
A few Regency errors were made. In no situation would a lady go out of doors without donning her gloves. Luncheon was a new concept in the Regency and was a hand-held meal, not a sit-down affair. Dinner was at about 4 or 5pm and would never be a feast of cold meats. Even a small dinner would be a “single course” that would be enough to stuff the heartiest of modern-day eaters. Chaperons were for courting couples. Once betrothed, none were needed any longer since the legal implications bound the two together and there was no chance of one trapping the other into marriage any longer. A stove in a kitchen was a relatively new thing and was uncommon in Regency homes, therefore it would not be waited for since most meals would be cooked over the kitchen hearth. Canada was not a country until 1867. Prior to that, it was a group of separate colonies, each with their own name, none of which was Canada—Upper Canada and Lower Canada existed, but each of those names is what they were called at the time, or “The Canadas.”
A general scene-setting error was made regarding the sensual implement of feeding each other grapes. The story is set in spring time. Where were they getting their grapes? Do not say a hothouse. When it is easy to grow grapes out of doors, no one would think to use valuable hothouse space for them. Otherwise, scene setting was lovely, using all the senses.
Characterization was good, if a little uneven. Darcy was more romantic in this book compared to most JAFF, though he wasn’t a mooncalf either. He courted Elizabeth in his own way, which was true to character in canon. But he lacked the personal responsibility he had in canon by letting Wickham go with someone else supervising. Elizabeth was not your JAFF Mary Sue, but she was Team Darcy too easily early on, yet it lacked heat. If I was Team Darcy, I’d have a little more passion. Her negative response to the trauma of the assault didn’t last long, which is unrealistic. Mr. Collins was an over-the-top villain. In my opinion, it worked—just barely. To have Wickham as a quasi-hero yet still a bad boy takes good writing, and it was done well. Mrs. Bennet having an even character was a little jarring. It begged the question—Why? Similarly, non-canon Lydia and Kitty were smooth, merely to make the story easier. Not easier to swallow, though.
The point of view was not consistent, as there was head-hopping and instances where the POV character could “see” that her own eyes were enormous and her complexion was pale.
The author could have changed filter words to make the novel tighter for the enjoyment of the reader. Show, don’t tell is not always known by a first time author, though.
As noted earlier, the story varies in angst, and it’s mostly relatively low until the violent scene near the end of the book, where it ramps up to high angst rather quickly. Fortunately, it’s short lived and settles to moderate just as fast. The whole scene is very well done, without any unnecessary detail.
As far as the development of the romance goes, the rate was moderate just like every other part of the book. That’s the reason I was surprised at the engagement at 40% into the book. Elizabeth wasn’t ready as far as my gut instinct went, and the author pushed her into love at the last minute. I felt that she liked Darcy, but there was no passion between them at that point. Passion does develop by the time they’re married, and a steamy non-sexual scene leads to an off-camera wedding night much later in the book.
The final chapter is what many would use as an epilogue, since it’s set a year and then several years in advance, which would benefit from a scene change marker. I suppose that by making it a chapter, the author pleases both fans of epilogues and those who don’t like them. In any case, it tied up loose ends and introduced some concepts that were on the fringes of the story that made for nice little ending vignettes.
The cover is beautiful, and its bright colours, excellent balance and fonts, and uniqueness should attract readers. It tells a little of the story inside as well.
I got a great deal of enjoyment out of reading Rose Cottage, which was a sweet (not in that stupid way they classify books, but in the old-fashioned word way), well-contrived novel that kept the reader happily looking forward to the next chapter. I would recommend it as a worthwhile read, and I look forward to reading more books by A.K. Madison.
Disclaimer: I’m a JAFF author, and some might say this review is a conflict of interest. I was a reader first, and my reviews are honest and impartial. I write them for both the reader and the author.
January 8, 2021
I want that cottage!!!
“Count the roses, not the thorns.” –Matshona Dhliwayo
This review may contain *** spoilers*** Rating: MA: mature audience due to adult themes, should be read by someone over 13-years old, maybe even 17. Angst level: medium: Trigger warnings: violence against a female, an attempted assault [unsuccessful], with disgusting vulgar language for the purpose of inflicting pain and humiliation. Propriety was a problem on several levels. [4.5 stars round to 5-stars]
“Just like the rose holds her beauty among the thorns—we can gather our strength from the most unlikely places.” –Christine Evangelou, Rocks Into Roses: Life Lessons and Inspiration for Personal Growth
Villains: OMG! Do we ever have villains!! Mr. Collins was horrid and such a pig. Poor Charlotte certainly bit off more than she could chew when she married him. I really felt for her and her situation. Caroline Bingley was simply a scream and was quite ridiculous. She received the set-down of the century. OMG! Darcy let loose with both barrels. She will never recover from a debacle of her own creation. Lady Matlock will see to it. LOL!
Lady Catherine was more than just insane. She ventured into Darcy House in London with the intent of forcing… I repeat… forcing Darcy to conform to her demands. That was a mistake she will likely not forget any time soon. It was rather sad, in a twisted sort of way. She demanded her way and expected everyone to kowtow to her outrageous schemes which were demeaning and insulting to Elizabeth. Darcy was having none-of-it. She knew what she wanted, was determined in having it; namely, Darcy married to her daughter; whatever the cost. Wickham was… well, he was a surprise. That SBRB just may have changed his stripes… not sure, as his story sailed with the morning tide. We can only speculate.
What I didn’t like: minutia, but then we have Darcy in charge and he lets nothing slip by his notice. Yes, everything was described in minute detail; however, I want that cottage. Heavy sigh. Seriously, I want that cottage.
What I liked: Elizabeth and Darcy came together early in the story and gave the reader lots of page-time with ODC. Oh, yes, I liked that. As their love story progressed, it became a bit steamy. They were a couple very much in love and they both experienced graphic dreams and desires both asleep and while awake. They were rather suggestive, nothing graphic but were steamy none the less.
Mrs. Bennet was a surprise. A reader might wonder about her change of character. Death does strange things to a woman. Reflecting on her married life with Mr. Bennet would give rise to her having to acknowledge points of grief and regret. This would have an impact on how she conducted herself. I felt for her and enjoyed her self-examination. I came to like her and enjoyed seeing her have a chance at a HEA.
Charles was my hero along with our Jane. What a power couple. Yeah, that was good. There were several new characters and it made for a delightful story in spite of the scary parts that made my skin crawl. Whew! This author put our Elizabeth through the wringer so to speak. Bless her heart. At every turn, something or someone was trying to dissuade her from marrying Darcy. Really… that was a bit much. I still enjoyed it. I LOVED the horses described in this story. They were so cute.
“As delicate as [a] flower, as tender as rose petals, choosing to be tender and kind in a harsh environment is not weakness, it’s courage.” –Luffina Lourdurj
I borrowed this through the KU program [1-6-21]. A review was not stipulated as part of the Kindle Unlimited program however, it was my choice and privilege to leave a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. I highly recommend this for a different variation on our favorite Pride and Prejudice story.
“Count the roses, not the thorns.” –Matshona Dhliwayo
This review may contain *** spoilers*** Rating: MA: mature audience due to adult themes, should be read by someone over 13-years old, maybe even 17. Angst level: medium: Trigger warnings: violence against a female, an attempted assault [unsuccessful], with disgusting vulgar language for the purpose of inflicting pain and humiliation. Propriety was a problem on several levels. [4.5 stars round to 5-stars]
“Just like the rose holds her beauty among the thorns—we can gather our strength from the most unlikely places.” –Christine Evangelou, Rocks Into Roses: Life Lessons and Inspiration for Personal Growth
Villains: OMG! Do we ever have villains!! Mr. Collins was horrid and such a pig. Poor Charlotte certainly bit off more than she could chew when she married him. I really felt for her and her situation. Caroline Bingley was simply a scream and was quite ridiculous. She received the set-down of the century. OMG! Darcy let loose with both barrels. She will never recover from a debacle of her own creation. Lady Matlock will see to it. LOL!
Lady Catherine was more than just insane. She ventured into Darcy House in London with the intent of forcing… I repeat… forcing Darcy to conform to her demands. That was a mistake she will likely not forget any time soon. It was rather sad, in a twisted sort of way. She demanded her way and expected everyone to kowtow to her outrageous schemes which were demeaning and insulting to Elizabeth. Darcy was having none-of-it. She knew what she wanted, was determined in having it; namely, Darcy married to her daughter; whatever the cost. Wickham was… well, he was a surprise. That SBRB just may have changed his stripes… not sure, as his story sailed with the morning tide. We can only speculate.
What I didn’t like: minutia, but then we have Darcy in charge and he lets nothing slip by his notice. Yes, everything was described in minute detail; however, I want that cottage. Heavy sigh. Seriously, I want that cottage.
What I liked: Elizabeth and Darcy came together early in the story and gave the reader lots of page-time with ODC. Oh, yes, I liked that. As their love story progressed, it became a bit steamy. They were a couple very much in love and they both experienced graphic dreams and desires both asleep and while awake. They were rather suggestive, nothing graphic but were steamy none the less.
Mrs. Bennet was a surprise. A reader might wonder about her change of character. Death does strange things to a woman. Reflecting on her married life with Mr. Bennet would give rise to her having to acknowledge points of grief and regret. This would have an impact on how she conducted herself. I felt for her and enjoyed her self-examination. I came to like her and enjoyed seeing her have a chance at a HEA.
Charles was my hero along with our Jane. What a power couple. Yeah, that was good. There were several new characters and it made for a delightful story in spite of the scary parts that made my skin crawl. Whew! This author put our Elizabeth through the wringer so to speak. Bless her heart. At every turn, something or someone was trying to dissuade her from marrying Darcy. Really… that was a bit much. I still enjoyed it. I LOVED the horses described in this story. They were so cute.
“As delicate as [a] flower, as tender as rose petals, choosing to be tender and kind in a harsh environment is not weakness, it’s courage.” –Luffina Lourdurj
I borrowed this through the KU program [1-6-21]. A review was not stipulated as part of the Kindle Unlimited program however, it was my choice and privilege to leave a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. I highly recommend this for a different variation on our favorite Pride and Prejudice story.
July 9, 2020
Very Good Debut
I very much enjoyed this debut novel. The book’s premise was very good. The storyline immediately captured my interest and held it throughout. I liked that there weren’t the usual misunderstandings between Elizabeth and Darcy and the time given for them to get to renew their acquaintance and have a second chance was nice— but what a drama-filled courtship thanks to the villains.
I thought the character portrayals well done, and in some instances, pleasantly different from what we often read (especially Mrs. Bennet and Lydia). There are the usual villains; Caroline (who gets perhaps one of the best set downs by Darcy I’ve read), Lady Catherine (quite a different take on her history), and Mr. Collins (who is downright awful). Wickham is there too; his role brief and quite dramatic.
Surprisingly, Colonel Fitzwilliam is never present and only gets a mention or two until the epilogue (I could definitely see a sequel here for him and his love interest—no spoilers as to who that is from me!)
Few proofreading errors, and well written. I did find it a bit difficult to follow how events crossed the span of time. Perhaps adding dates here and there would have helped. The mourning period seemed short? Otherwise very good and I definitely enjoyed this book. I recommend it.
I very much enjoyed this debut novel. The book’s premise was very good. The storyline immediately captured my interest and held it throughout. I liked that there weren’t the usual misunderstandings between Elizabeth and Darcy and the time given for them to get to renew their acquaintance and have a second chance was nice— but what a drama-filled courtship thanks to the villains.
I thought the character portrayals well done, and in some instances, pleasantly different from what we often read (especially Mrs. Bennet and Lydia). There are the usual villains; Caroline (who gets perhaps one of the best set downs by Darcy I’ve read), Lady Catherine (quite a different take on her history), and Mr. Collins (who is downright awful). Wickham is there too; his role brief and quite dramatic.
Surprisingly, Colonel Fitzwilliam is never present and only gets a mention or two until the epilogue (I could definitely see a sequel here for him and his love interest—no spoilers as to who that is from me!)
Few proofreading errors, and well written. I did find it a bit difficult to follow how events crossed the span of time. Perhaps adding dates here and there would have helped. The mourning period seemed short? Otherwise very good and I definitely enjoyed this book. I recommend it.
January 10, 2021
Fast moving tale
Mr. Bennet is dead. The story of what happens to the Bennet family afterwards it pretty entertaining. The main plot line is well developed but all others are barely mentioned. No scene where the will is read which I think was a needed scene.
Mr. Collins is horrible. Lizzy and Darcy becoming a couple was nearly angst free. I enjoyed the story but wish there wasn’t so much left out.
Good for a single reading.
Mr. Bennet is dead. The story of what happens to the Bennet family afterwards it pretty entertaining. The main plot line is well developed but all others are barely mentioned. No scene where the will is read which I think was a needed scene.
Mr. Collins is horrible. Lizzy and Darcy becoming a couple was nearly angst free. I enjoyed the story but wish there wasn’t so much left out.
Good for a single reading.
September 9, 2020
3.5 rounded up. Great considering this is the first book she’s published. Look forward to reading more by this author.
July 20, 2020
This Pride and Prejudice variation starts after the death of Mr Bennet, a few months after the marriage of Jane and Bingley. Bingley has purchased Netherfield and is working to renovate the dower house on that property. The story weaves its way through Elizabeth stepping up to take charge of her family, Mrs Bennet becomes more calm, Darcy shows his admiration for Elizabeth through the remodel, Mr Collins shows that he is creepy beyond measure, Caroline and Lady Catherine shows us various levels of awful.
The story doesn't contain any real pride or prejudice but rather how our dear couple deals with the stress put on them by others.
The story doesn't contain any real pride or prejudice but rather how our dear couple deals with the stress put on them by others.
December 20, 2020
I saw this book came highly recommended by my JAFF friends and I had to read it! I loved the story up to the move into the cottage then I found it changed in tone and plot. I loved the Darcy and Elizabeth up to the Mr Collins/Lady Catherine plot, then I found that not only the tone changed but even the way that Darcy and Elizabeth acted towards each other did, too. I found that a bit jarring, almost like one story was finished and a different story was started.
June 28, 2020
Thoroughly enjoyed this variation inspired by Jane Austen's classic Pride and Prejudice. Rather sad in tone but it had happy moments as well and was an emotional read. I hope she keeps writing lovely stories for us to enjoy.
August 23, 2020
I enjoyed this P&P variation a lot, especially the idea of the cottage, as a solution for the Bennet ladies after Mr. Bennet's death, and provided by Mr. Bingley. He's such a sweet guy, I can't imagine him doing any differently for them.
But once that solution was agreed on, the story kind of lost me in too easy a resolution for Lizzy and Darcy (a romance needs some conflict), way too much kissing, and once again some of the problem characters turning out downright insane. The character polarity becomes unbelievable and melodramatic. Still it is in many ways a sweet story, and I'm sure others will like it better than I did.
But once that solution was agreed on, the story kind of lost me in too easy a resolution for Lizzy and Darcy (a romance needs some conflict), way too much kissing, and once again some of the problem characters turning out downright insane. The character polarity becomes unbelievable and melodramatic. Still it is in many ways a sweet story, and I'm sure others will like it better than I did.
August 20, 2020
Enjoyable
This book started out sadly, with the death of Mr Bennet. It continues with a gentle telling of the developing love of Darcy and Elizabeth. There is a bit of angst as Mr Collins does his best to interfere. This is lovely variation and I look forward to more from this author.
This book started out sadly, with the death of Mr Bennet. It continues with a gentle telling of the developing love of Darcy and Elizabeth. There is a bit of angst as Mr Collins does his best to interfere. This is lovely variation and I look forward to more from this author.
September 20, 2023
Good book
I enjoyed this story it was a great love story. I like how going to the hedgerows was not quite as bad as Mrs Bennett thought. Lady Catherine, miss biingley and Mr Collins were too bad!
I enjoyed this story it was a great love story. I like how going to the hedgerows was not quite as bad as Mrs Bennett thought. Lady Catherine, miss biingley and Mr Collins were too bad!
July 30, 2020
Avid Reader
I have to second all positive words for this debut novel. The only reason that I put it down was to sleep. Collins, Caroline, and Lady Catherine got what they deserved. For once Wickham didn't end up in jail or dead. Instead he kept Collins from causing Elizabeth serious injury. Charlotte really didn't know what a vicious man she married. Jane was happily married to Bingley when Mr. Bennet died unexpectedly. Darcy captured Elizabeth 's heart a quarter of the way through the book, but they had do battle Caroline, Collins, and Lady Catherine.
I have to second all positive words for this debut novel. The only reason that I put it down was to sleep. Collins, Caroline, and Lady Catherine got what they deserved. For once Wickham didn't end up in jail or dead. Instead he kept Collins from causing Elizabeth serious injury. Charlotte really didn't know what a vicious man she married. Jane was happily married to Bingley when Mr. Bennet died unexpectedly. Darcy captured Elizabeth 's heart a quarter of the way through the book, but they had do battle Caroline, Collins, and Lady Catherine.
June 26, 2020
As someone who has read countless Pride and Prejudice variations, I enjoyed the many wonderful and unusual elements brought to the genre in this new variation by debut author A.K. Madison. It was utterly refreshing to see Elizabeth take charge of the Longbourn household, setting expectations for her sisters and helping them be successful. She asked for help, and they rose to the occasion. She was supportive of them, and it occurred to me that nobody had ever believed in their abilities before. Their father thought them all silly, and their mother was silly. Elizabeth brought out the best in them all. I also enjoyed the transformation of Mrs. Bennet as she evolved into a more mature and thoughtful person. The more she is relied upon, the more reliable she becomes. It was interesting to consider just how much influence Mr. Bennet actually had over his family, and what a change his absence makes. Mr. Collins was utterly repugnant, and some scenes with him, although not completely graphic, may upset readers expecting a clean story. It was lovely to envision a happy future for each character, and I certainly wouldn't mind sequels following each of them!
July 7, 2020
Entertaining
For a first published work, this is very well done. A.K. Madison is a talented writer and storyteller, who knows how to develop a plot, and create characters that you can care about. After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, Mr Bennett dies unexpectedly, and the Bennett ladies are helped by Bingley and Darcy to start a new life at Rose Cottage, on the Netherfield property. Elizabeth learns more about Mr Darcy, and her bad opinion of him is reversed.
This is a common premise for JAFF works, and it is done well here. ODC find there way to each other fairly easily. However, I'm not fond of variations in which the villains are so bad so as to be monstrous. There is a certain "icky" factor to these stories that overshadows any romantic content, and casts a pall over everything. In this tale, Lady Catherine and Mr Collins are the monsters, with Caroline Bingley coming in a close third. To make it even more gruesome, Lady Catherine's behavior is blamed on the "French disease" supposedly passed on to her by her late husband, a noted rake. The villains are so horrible to Elizabeth that I have to imagine that she would bear the psychological scars for the rest of her life. And then there's Darcy, always promising to protect her from these people, but time and again she is attacked, so his promises seem pretty ineffectual, however good his intentions.
I always like variations where Mrs Bennett acts a little more reasonably, and in this one the death of Mr Bennett seems to have worked wonders on her attitudes, much as you would think that the reverse would be true. Mary, Kitty and Lydia also seem to calm down after their father's death, so we don't have to endure too much of their annoying behavior. Jane is already married to Bingley, and Mary is given more of a role, which is nice.
The book is well written and well edited. Aside from the extreme horrors visited upon Elizabeth, I recommend it.
For a first published work, this is very well done. A.K. Madison is a talented writer and storyteller, who knows how to develop a plot, and create characters that you can care about. After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, Mr Bennett dies unexpectedly, and the Bennett ladies are helped by Bingley and Darcy to start a new life at Rose Cottage, on the Netherfield property. Elizabeth learns more about Mr Darcy, and her bad opinion of him is reversed.
This is a common premise for JAFF works, and it is done well here. ODC find there way to each other fairly easily. However, I'm not fond of variations in which the villains are so bad so as to be monstrous. There is a certain "icky" factor to these stories that overshadows any romantic content, and casts a pall over everything. In this tale, Lady Catherine and Mr Collins are the monsters, with Caroline Bingley coming in a close third. To make it even more gruesome, Lady Catherine's behavior is blamed on the "French disease" supposedly passed on to her by her late husband, a noted rake. The villains are so horrible to Elizabeth that I have to imagine that she would bear the psychological scars for the rest of her life. And then there's Darcy, always promising to protect her from these people, but time and again she is attacked, so his promises seem pretty ineffectual, however good his intentions.
I always like variations where Mrs Bennett acts a little more reasonably, and in this one the death of Mr Bennett seems to have worked wonders on her attitudes, much as you would think that the reverse would be true. Mary, Kitty and Lydia also seem to calm down after their father's death, so we don't have to endure too much of their annoying behavior. Jane is already married to Bingley, and Mary is given more of a role, which is nice.
The book is well written and well edited. Aside from the extreme horrors visited upon Elizabeth, I recommend it.
July 19, 2020
Wow! Loved it.
September 27, 2020
This is one of the best P & P variations I've ever read. It has a general feel-good atmosphere between Mr Darcy and Elizabeth, even if the setting is after the death of Mr Bennet. It is the first book by this author and I send her a big congrats because I loved it!
I read this book some time ago and I couldn't find it in Goodreads by the time I finished it so unfortunately my review is a bit old.
I will just make it in general terms from what I remember and might edit it in the future if I remember more details.
As I mentioned at the beginning, the story starts after the death of Mr Bennet. I think somehow Mr Darcy gets to Longbourn before Mr Bennet's funeral. Jane had already married Mr Bingley.
Mr Bingley had found a cottage in his property that might have been a dower house, had offered it to Mrs Bennet but it was in need of repair, so in the meantime the Bennet ladies were going to move into Netherfield's main house because Mr Collins was going to take possession of Longbourn.
Mr Darcy offers his help with the repairs, so he gets to spend a lot of time with Elizabeth. He is very gallant and considerate from the start, bringing her something to eat and making her sit down on the day of Mr Bennet's funeral. Then, he sends her some notebooks, pens, and a penknife (for which he asks a farthing as payment, this detail is very important) because he has a habit of writing things down in notebooks he carries in his pocket and she remarks on it when they start working together.
I don't want to spoil too much, I am just going to say that I wish we could get a glimpse of that Mr Darcy in working clothes on a ladder (sigh!), I am sure Elizabeth blushed all the way to Netherfield and well into the night in her bedroom.
Some extras:
Mr Wickham does a good deed!
Disturbing: Mr Collins!
Surprises for Mrs Bennet
Warning: some disturbing and violent scenes.
Anyway, I found it overall very romantic and sweet! Elizabeth is not as stubborn and is a very good manager in the chaos and at the start of their new life. Mr Darcy has been reformed, so he is the loving, tender, patient, passionate and protective man we love, not the haughty one.
Recommended!!!
I read this book some time ago and I couldn't find it in Goodreads by the time I finished it so unfortunately my review is a bit old.
I will just make it in general terms from what I remember and might edit it in the future if I remember more details.
As I mentioned at the beginning, the story starts after the death of Mr Bennet. I think somehow Mr Darcy gets to Longbourn before Mr Bennet's funeral. Jane had already married Mr Bingley.
Mr Bingley had found a cottage in his property that might have been a dower house, had offered it to Mrs Bennet but it was in need of repair, so in the meantime the Bennet ladies were going to move into Netherfield's main house because Mr Collins was going to take possession of Longbourn.
Mr Darcy offers his help with the repairs, so he gets to spend a lot of time with Elizabeth. He is very gallant and considerate from the start, bringing her something to eat and making her sit down on the day of Mr Bennet's funeral. Then, he sends her some notebooks, pens, and a penknife (for which he asks a farthing as payment, this detail is very important) because he has a habit of writing things down in notebooks he carries in his pocket and she remarks on it when they start working together.
I don't want to spoil too much, I am just going to say that I wish we could get a glimpse of that Mr Darcy in working clothes on a ladder (sigh!), I am sure Elizabeth blushed all the way to Netherfield and well into the night in her bedroom.
Some extras:
Mr Wickham does a good deed!
Disturbing: Mr Collins!
Surprises for Mrs Bennet
Warning: some disturbing and violent scenes.
Anyway, I found it overall very romantic and sweet! Elizabeth is not as stubborn and is a very good manager in the chaos and at the start of their new life. Mr Darcy has been reformed, so he is the loving, tender, patient, passionate and protective man we love, not the haughty one.
Recommended!!!
October 19, 2020
This was a long, long story. Mostly because it was pretty slow throughout the book. The thing that I disliked most was all the unnecessary discription. It seemed that every idea or article discussed need multiple sentences to articulate what could have been said in one or two. Then after that was done, in the next chapter or so, it was revisited with another round of the same commentary. I did like the plot. Although many variations have been written in which Mr Bennet dies, in this one Mr. Darcy's assistance is timely and done in such a way that early on, it changes the dynamics of his relationship with Elizabeth. There were multiple subplots that overall added to the story's plot.
In this variation, Jane and Charles are reconciled after Darcy's failed proposal. Charles has purchased Netherfield to make a home for Jane near her family. Unexpectedly, Mr. Bennet passes away, leaving Charles and Jane to figure out what is to be done with the remaining Bennet sisters and their mother. Mr Darcy arrives on the very day of Mr. Bennet's funeral, at Bingley request for assistance with his newly acquired property. He realizes that he still loves Elizabeth and is willing to do anything to assist her and the family through this difficult period. Charles proposes a cottage on the Netherfield property, which is in serious disrepair, as it has been long neglected, to be refurbished to the Bennet ladies. Darcy throws himself into helping Charles with is and many other projects, to help the family. This changes Elizabeth's perceptions of the man and a new relationship buds between the two. Lots of twists and turns work to separate the couple, but eventually we get our HEA.
In this variation, Jane and Charles are reconciled after Darcy's failed proposal. Charles has purchased Netherfield to make a home for Jane near her family. Unexpectedly, Mr. Bennet passes away, leaving Charles and Jane to figure out what is to be done with the remaining Bennet sisters and their mother. Mr Darcy arrives on the very day of Mr. Bennet's funeral, at Bingley request for assistance with his newly acquired property. He realizes that he still loves Elizabeth and is willing to do anything to assist her and the family through this difficult period. Charles proposes a cottage on the Netherfield property, which is in serious disrepair, as it has been long neglected, to be refurbished to the Bennet ladies. Darcy throws himself into helping Charles with is and many other projects, to help the family. This changes Elizabeth's perceptions of the man and a new relationship buds between the two. Lots of twists and turns work to separate the couple, but eventually we get our HEA.
January 29, 2021
There were things I really liked about this re-imagining, but a few things that were just uggg, and bugged me so much it affected my overall feeling for the book.
This assumes the original storyline to Darcy's proposal and Elizabeth turning him down - and then goes its own way. Big change, in that Mr. Bennett passes away, which of course brings in the entail and all the issues with that. Luckily, Bingley (although Darcy doesn't write the letter to Elizabeth to explain things, he does fix things with Bingley/Jane) has a "cottage" on his property that Mrs.Bennett and the girls can move into as Collins comes to take over Longbourn.
I had to laugh at this little "cottage" which, while run down, sounded pretty big and extravagant. So many rooms and gardens. Not quite my perception of a "cottage" but oh well.
One thing I liked in this version, is that Mrs. Bennett steps up and is actually a very competent and likeable woman. Even Lydia ends up in a positive light. But Lady Catherine and Collins ... I perhaps could have accepted the over-the-top actions of Lady Catherine, while exaggerated from the original, they were still somewhat in line with her character. But Collins? The Collins in this book is SO unlike the original, it was unbelievable and beyond simply unlikeable. .
Borrowed Kindle copy with the KindleUnlimited program. No audio.
This assumes the original storyline to Darcy's proposal and Elizabeth turning him down - and then goes its own way. Big change, in that Mr. Bennett passes away, which of course brings in the entail and all the issues with that. Luckily, Bingley (although Darcy doesn't write the letter to Elizabeth to explain things, he does fix things with Bingley/Jane) has a "cottage" on his property that Mrs.Bennett and the girls can move into as Collins comes to take over Longbourn.
I had to laugh at this little "cottage" which, while run down, sounded pretty big and extravagant. So many rooms and gardens. Not quite my perception of a "cottage" but oh well.
One thing I liked in this version, is that Mrs. Bennett steps up and is actually a very competent and likeable woman. Even Lydia ends up in a positive light. But Lady Catherine and Collins ... I perhaps could have accepted the over-the-top actions of Lady Catherine, while exaggerated from the original, they were still somewhat in line with her character. But Collins? The Collins in this book is SO unlike the original, it was unbelievable and beyond simply unlikeable. .
Borrowed Kindle copy with the KindleUnlimited program. No audio.
July 21, 2020
DNF 18%. Just not much depth to the characters. Couldn’t connect with Elizabeth or Darcy, and Darcy’s character just did not feel like “Darcy” if that makes sense? In this story, we gather that Darcy had his failed proposal at Hunsford but never gave Elizabeth the letter. Here, he meets Elizabeth again on the eve of her father’s funeral and is only to happy/eager to help her out with fixing of Rose Cottage. But... nothing humble about how he goes about it. In the original P&P, we don’t learn about his involvement and help with Lydia’s elopement until it is accidentally mentioned by Lydia herself. Mr. Darcy is too humble to brag about it and does not wish to make Elizabeth feel indebted towards him or to earn her gratitude in that way. In this story, the author makes Darcy loose that humble aspect as he is constantly telling Elizabeth of his involvement in the remodeling of Rose Cottage and all that he is doing and who he knows that he is bringing in (i.e. bringing his own gardeners to work on the garden at Rose Cottage). It was kind of annoying.
Also.... the emotions of the characters are not well portrayed. And sometimes they seemed emotionless at a time when some emotion should be there.
Lastly, the conversation the characters have feel more like reading an essay than listening to a conversation.
Idk, just not my style. So sadly, I stopped reading at 18%.
Also.... the emotions of the characters are not well portrayed. And sometimes they seemed emotionless at a time when some emotion should be there.
Lastly, the conversation the characters have feel more like reading an essay than listening to a conversation.
Idk, just not my style. So sadly, I stopped reading at 18%.
Want to read
July 16, 2022DNF at 38%. Pride and Prejudice variations can be hit or miss. This one really didn't engage me enough to push through the slow start. It also didn't hit the right note in terms of dialogue (which felt clunky and basic), with none of the charm and incisiveness of the OG P&P. I also found the development of the relationship between Elizabeth and Darcy was satisfying by the point I had stopped reading (shortly after his proposal). It was more telling than showing, flat, and doesn't feel as though they actually really know each other enough to be all "I love you! Marry me!" "I love you too! Okay!"
The one thing I really did like was giving Mrs. Bennet an actual character, with interests outside of being vexed, gossiping, and despairing her daughters' marital status. To me, this actually could be the really interesting story--Mrs. Bennet as widow, and how that widowhood alters and impacts her, and allowing her to come into her own, rather than the caricature she is in so many retellings. Madison does the same with Mary, providing slightly more depth than the sour, dour Mary that is typical.
The one thing I really did like was giving Mrs. Bennet an actual character, with interests outside of being vexed, gossiping, and despairing her daughters' marital status. To me, this actually could be the really interesting story--Mrs. Bennet as widow, and how that widowhood alters and impacts her, and allowing her to come into her own, rather than the caricature she is in so many retellings. Madison does the same with Mary, providing slightly more depth than the sour, dour Mary that is typical.
August 16, 2020
A relatively fast moving story, though it does drag a little in later chapters (particularly post wedding). I appreciate the writing for good spelling and grammar after reading quite a few that do not. There are occasional anachronistic words or phrases. I had to laugh at the very modern, very American sounding “climb him like a tree” especially coming from a Lizzy so virginal and innocent that she didn’t understand the double entendre in “mend your pen” (a joke originally written by a spinster)!!
Darcy and Lizzy are different in this; she loses much of her cheekiness (though of course she is bereaved), he is more direct. Many of the Bennets are different also, which is a plot point and enjoyable. I liked Mary, I think she was well done - fairly similar to her canon character, but with more depth. Elizabeth gave her more respect too. The romance scenes were well written; cosy and lovely, with a hint of passion but not too much detail. Some very good set down scenes, by various characters.
I found that the plot seemed to jump forward at times, skimming over occasions which would have given backstory for later occurrences. There is little courtship between Darcy and Lizzy for example - we move from her disliking him and him thinking it hopeless, to a sudden proposal and “I love you”. Later Darcy refers to their walks and talks etc during this courtship we don’t see. Also there is a scene where Mary cries over fancying someone who doesn’t notice her and next we hear he has proposed and though all were apparently expecting it, the reader isn’t given much hint. I did actually read most of this story on A03, though it was taken down before I finished, so I am aware that these scenes were actually written and have been taken out. It has been heavily edited prior to publishing, and I think it has lost some good parts as a result. I would have preferred that the Caroline Bingley storyline was cut - I didn’t find her behaviour very realistic (though the library scene was awesome), and we already have two irrational “baddies” to provide angst.
Personally I also really liked the Rose Cottage backstory, which made it the cottage almost another character, and was the reason for the story name. It isn’t necessary to the rest of the plot, but I thought it quite unique. Sad it was cut.
I enjoyed this overall and I would read others by the same author, but I wouldn’t re-read this one.
Darcy and Lizzy are different in this; she loses much of her cheekiness (though of course she is bereaved), he is more direct. Many of the Bennets are different also, which is a plot point and enjoyable. I liked Mary, I think she was well done - fairly similar to her canon character, but with more depth. Elizabeth gave her more respect too. The romance scenes were well written; cosy and lovely, with a hint of passion but not too much detail. Some very good set down scenes, by various characters.
I found that the plot seemed to jump forward at times, skimming over occasions which would have given backstory for later occurrences. There is little courtship between Darcy and Lizzy for example - we move from her disliking him and him thinking it hopeless, to a sudden proposal and “I love you”. Later Darcy refers to their walks and talks etc during this courtship we don’t see. Also there is a scene where Mary cries over fancying someone who doesn’t notice her and next we hear he has proposed and though all were apparently expecting it, the reader isn’t given much hint. I did actually read most of this story on A03, though it was taken down before I finished, so I am aware that these scenes were actually written and have been taken out. It has been heavily edited prior to publishing, and I think it has lost some good parts as a result. I would have preferred that the Caroline Bingley storyline was cut - I didn’t find her behaviour very realistic (though the library scene was awesome), and we already have two irrational “baddies” to provide angst.
Personally I also really liked the Rose Cottage backstory, which made it the cottage almost another character, and was the reason for the story name. It isn’t necessary to the rest of the plot, but I thought it quite unique. Sad it was cut.
I enjoyed this overall and I would read others by the same author, but I wouldn’t re-read this one.
July 12, 2020
Not bad
I like the more sensible Mrs. Bennett. Having seen the difference in a parent after the loss of the other, I also findthe changed Mrs. B believable. But where was she hiding all that time? Overall I like the story. But I think there are some inconsistencies: Elizabeth sits in a chair so Collins cannot sit next to her yet Darcy is able to (did she move? Is he perched on arm of chair?); what happened to the instructions to Lydia: 6 months of wearing black? And possibly mor I skipped over. Lizzy seems awfully familiar with the care of horses for someone who doesn't ride much. There are two uses of "anxious" that should be"eager" but there are also two jests about killing someone which seem overly modern and therefore anachronistic to me. Then again there are wonderful uses of uncommon language that show some research was done (what is a Benjamin? What is couverture?)
I like the more sensible Mrs. Bennett. Having seen the difference in a parent after the loss of the other, I also findthe changed Mrs. B believable. But where was she hiding all that time? Overall I like the story. But I think there are some inconsistencies: Elizabeth sits in a chair so Collins cannot sit next to her yet Darcy is able to (did she move? Is he perched on arm of chair?); what happened to the instructions to Lydia: 6 months of wearing black? And possibly mor I skipped over. Lizzy seems awfully familiar with the care of horses for someone who doesn't ride much. There are two uses of "anxious" that should be"eager" but there are also two jests about killing someone which seem overly modern and therefore anachronistic to me. Then again there are wonderful uses of uncommon language that show some research was done (what is a Benjamin? What is couverture?)
September 20, 2021
very Enjoyable
Clue/ SIDE NOTE: the author fails to inform the reader in the preface that Elizabeth never received a letter from Darcy at Hunsford. This bit of forgotten information would have helped prevent confusion as this version begins. I just could not understand Elizabeth’s attitude and animosity still present in the beginning of the work until it was casually mentioned later that the letter was never given. Once you get past this, it is very interesting and engaging. If you are interested in a slower paced day to day courtship between our hero and heroine, this will interest you. It was refreshing with new characters and some over the top shocking dramatic moments. Definitely worth reading. I read on kindle unlimited but I’m pretty sure I will end up buying it so I may reread favorite passage/ chapters.
Clue/ SIDE NOTE: the author fails to inform the reader in the preface that Elizabeth never received a letter from Darcy at Hunsford. This bit of forgotten information would have helped prevent confusion as this version begins. I just could not understand Elizabeth’s attitude and animosity still present in the beginning of the work until it was casually mentioned later that the letter was never given. Once you get past this, it is very interesting and engaging. If you are interested in a slower paced day to day courtship between our hero and heroine, this will interest you. It was refreshing with new characters and some over the top shocking dramatic moments. Definitely worth reading. I read on kindle unlimited but I’m pretty sure I will end up buying it so I may reread favorite passage/ chapters.
July 3, 2020
I really enjoyed this book! The characters were well-developed and I enjoyed the changes that some made. I loved all the new characters introduced to the story and their effects on our already established, familiar characters. I have read too many variations that were constant woe and heartbreak for those involved, but this story had a very good balance of hardship and happiness. There’s also a few doses of just deserts. I am so hopeful that the author writes further stories following Rose Cottage, to bring us yet closer to these new characters and our familiar ones who have been refreshed by this author.
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February 5, 2024
A truly lovely story
I loved this, no spoiler when I say Mr Bennet has died and things are in a bit of an upheaval. Things though do soon start to get better as Darcy steps in, Jane and Bingley are already married and can help plus Charlotte Collins writes to say they won't be moving straight away so the ladies are not obliged to move out of Longbourn straight away. There emerged a lovely gentle story, with new characters who contributed to the story. Lady C, tries her worst, Caroline B. firmly dealt with, Wickham not as dastardly as usual, but evil Mr Collins - well words can't describe.
Recommended for a very good read.
I loved this, no spoiler when I say Mr Bennet has died and things are in a bit of an upheaval. Things though do soon start to get better as Darcy steps in, Jane and Bingley are already married and can help plus Charlotte Collins writes to say they won't be moving straight away so the ladies are not obliged to move out of Longbourn straight away. There emerged a lovely gentle story, with new characters who contributed to the story. Lady C, tries her worst, Caroline B. firmly dealt with, Wickham not as dastardly as usual, but evil Mr Collins - well words can't describe.
Recommended for a very good read.
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