Christine wrote: "please please please check out my short story!! you don't have to register or pay, just download on your kindle or as a pdf or read online. i would really appreciate any opinions! thanks so much. h..." Christine, I read the piece in one go. It reads well. You have painted a picture of guilt, and responsibility, and lives travelling like ships in the dark. The construction is skillful, the words well-chosen, and the emotions come across vividly.
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Christine, I read the piece in one go. It reads well. You have painted a picture of guilt, and responsibility, and lives travelling like ships in the dark. The construction is skillful, the words well-chosen, and the emotions come across vividly.