Def my fav in the series but I’ve read them completely out of order. Love a little cowboy romance even though you’d have to kidnap me to get me on a fDef my fav in the series but I’ve read them completely out of order. Love a little cowboy romance even though you’d have to kidnap me to get me on a farm...more
Not bad but it felt like the mmc never grew up from like 3rd grade. Like im sorry you cannot be pushing 30 still doing the “he’s mean to you because h
Not bad but it felt like the mmc never grew up from like 3rd grade. Like im sorry you cannot be pushing 30 still doing the “he’s mean to you because he likes you” bit, it no longer works and reads as you being a fucking weirdo. Like he sees her for the first time, thinks she’s hot because she’s literally described as looking like Jessica rabbit with blonde hair and blue eyes, but instead feels the need to go up to her and tell her that she’s actually ugly compared to girls who don’t have a fake ass and tit….when not that it matters but hers are real ...more
This was good like I liked it a lot. BLACK VAMPIRES! Sorry but that part was just so fun and I loved reading a book with black mcs, written in a wa4.5
This was good like I liked it a lot. BLACK VAMPIRES! Sorry but that part was just so fun and I loved reading a book with black mcs, written in a way where like super small things like her braids just like idk showed she was black. The whole like political intrigue was really cool and I loved the relationship (?) between Susenyos and Kidan like there were so many plot twists and just like the way it was always giving “everything is not what it seems”. ...more
A good book that despite very few and awful football descriptions was fun. I think I just really enjoyed the relationship between the two mcs and thatA good book that despite very few and awful football descriptions was fun. I think I just really enjoyed the relationship between the two mcs and that them getting together didn’t just solve all their problems. ...more
Just wanted more like it was good but it was very forgettable and I feel like for the premise to be what it was there should’ve been much more angst. Just wanted more like it was good but it was very forgettable and I feel like for the premise to be what it was there should’ve been much more angst. I also think the plot was lazy and predictable and either the focus should’ve been the relationship or this (more interesting) plot about wolves and witches and shit. Like to me it felt like the real plot of the book because secondary and barely developed but like it was added so that there could be some connection to future books....more
This was ok, like I enjoyed all the characters and I liked how the fmc seemed to actually act her age and everyone was like mostly normal in the book.This was ok, like I enjoyed all the characters and I liked how the fmc seemed to actually act her age and everyone was like mostly normal in the book. I think that the premise was really fun but everything was resolved so quick so there wasn’t a lot of time to really like play more with it...more
I couldn’t do it anymore. It’s not like I was expecting some masterpiece but like the continuous references to her virginity and the way thaDnf @ 39%
I couldn’t do it anymore. It’s not like I was expecting some masterpiece but like the continuous references to her virginity and the way that she just seemed dumbfounded by like all displays of wealth, I could not do it. Like why ru shocked that at a nice store the things are expensive ...more
1.5 So boring Literally everything was so bland. There was no real plot because there was no real conflict. I never got to watch like conflict be resol1.5 So boring Literally everything was so bland. There was no real plot because there was no real conflict. I never got to watch like conflict be resolved or like anything. Also any of the “conflict” was either dumb or also boring. The whole premise of this was like second chance from high school sweethearts. Second chance works best in my opinion when there either forced proximity or someone has to grovel. The author tried to do the latter but it’s rlly hard to be invested in the groveling when he never did anything wrong. The reason they broke up was literally so normal, he’s leaving for college and don’t wanna do long distance, and nothing was added to make it interesting. Because no one did anything actually wrong he groveled because he never called or visited her?? Even though like she told him when they broke up that she didn’t expect that. Like he kept going in the book forgive me forgive me and I’m like for what. The other thing is he’s was a pro football player and like apparently was in the news for bad things (fucking around) I’ll mention that I think that should’ve been explored deeper or shown instead of told because I was reading the whole time like what did he even do and even when it was explained I was still somewhat confused purely because there wasn’t enough world building/explaining to make it seem sort of real. Next thing is idk if this author researched football or naw, my guess is no but whatever. His reasoning for this whole thing was he was in a bad contract which like changed him and made him shallow, idk it just didn’t make any real sense and when I tried to buy into it I was left bored. Last thing abt plot is just like ofc there has to be end of the book “conflict” and I put that in quotations intentionally however this one’s was so dumb and solved in like 10 pages. The entire thing could’ve just been cut out of the book like. Now all of this could’ve been true and I might have been able to enjoy the book, however the writing was also not good. For example, gems such as
“And last, but certainly not least, the man is a prime example of what fills my clit closet. “
Clit closet…..
“You’re about to get so laid,”
Read it closely, how tf do u get so laid like in context it made no sense either. Idk maybe author mean you’re so about to get laid but..I know this is rlly minor to pick at but honestly this is just one example
Furthermore, I could not stand one side character (savannah). I thought the kid was cute and that whole situation was one of the few enjoyable parts in the book. Last redeeming part would have to be the smut. In general only real reason I finished this is bc I was on a plane and it was the only book I had downloaded.
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1.5 So boring Literally everything was so bland. There was no real plot because there was no real conflict. I never got to watch like conflict be resolved or like anything. Also any of the “conflict” was either dumb or also boring. The whole premise of this was like second chance from high school sweethearts. Second chance works best in my opinion when there either forced proximity or someone has to grovel. The author tried to do the latter but it’s rlly hard to be invested in the groveling when he never did anything wrong. The reason they broke up was literally so normal, he’s leaving for college and don’t wanna do long distance, and nothing was added to make it interesting. Because no one did anything actually wrong he groveled because he never called or visited her?? Even though like she told him when they broke up that she didn’t expect that. Like he kept going in the book forgive me forgive me and I’m like for what. The other thing is he’s was a pro football player and like apparently was in the news for bad things (fucking around) I’ll mention that I think that should’ve been explored deeper or shown instead of told because I was reading the whole time like what did he even do and even when it was explained I was still somewhat confused purely because there wasn’t enough world building/explaining to make it seem sort of real. Next thing is idk if this author researched football or naw, my guess is no but whatever. His reasoning for this whole thing was he was in a bad contract which like changed him and made him shallow, idk it just didn’t make any real sense and when I tried to buy into it I was left bored. Last thing abt plot is just like ofc there has to be end of the book “conflict” and I put that in quotations intentionally however this one’s was so dumb and solved in like 10 pages. The entire thing could’ve just been cut out of the book like. Now all of this could’ve been true and I might have been able to enjoy the book, however the writing was also not good. For example, gems such as
“And last, but certainly not least, the man is a prime example of what fills my clit closet. “
Clit closet…..
“You’re about to get so laid,”
Read it closely, how tf do u get so laid like in context it made no sense either. Idk maybe author mean you’re so about to get laid but..I know this is rlly minor to pick at but honestly this is just one example
Furthermore, I could not stand one side character (savannah). I thought the kid was cute and that whole situation was one of the few enjoyable parts in the book. Last redeeming part would have to be the smut. In general only real reason I finished this is bc I was on a plane and it was the only book I had downloaded....more
This was a monster romance frfr like they were not humanoid rlly and yeah. Umm idk it’s smut and monsters so it was pretty good. Like idk short and swThis was a monster romance frfr like they were not humanoid rlly and yeah. Umm idk it’s smut and monsters so it was pretty good. Like idk short and sweet ...more
This was shockingly rlly good and imo more plot then smut. Like the plot and secrets and like political intrigue in this book was so good, like yes thThis was shockingly rlly good and imo more plot then smut. Like the plot and secrets and like political intrigue in this book was so good, like yes there’s smut but like I was so interested in how the plot was gonna go as well. Umm as much as everyone outside of given has major issues I will say that I loved varick and Laurent’s relationship like their fights and just the years they spent together oml. ...more
Hmm idk how to feel about this one cuz like on the one hand I love a good rh, but I found the plot of this one to just be so meh. Like it was so builtHmm idk how to feel about this one cuz like on the one hand I love a good rh, but I found the plot of this one to just be so meh. Like it was so built up and then the resolution fell rlly flat to me like damn. I also think we needed better world building like ok the underworld exists and there are fallen angels, is there a god? Like what’s the magic systems that exist. They mention the underworld exists outside of like religious ideas but bro huh? Idk it just left me a little confused. I also wish there were more smut scenes I’m sorry maybe just needed a longer book like everything in that book happened in the span of like a weak and I wish it stretched out longer. I liked Lourdes and like her struggles internally like that was a nice touch and her men were fine but outside of Kane were just not given as much of a character arc as her. Idk I just wanted more from this cuz I love rh with black woman and like poc men ...more
I love Anne Malcom’s writing y’all. I read book 2 a while ago and had mostly forgot abt it but I love low key that I was able to go into this one k4.5
I love Anne Malcom’s writing y’all. I read book 2 a while ago and had mostly forgot abt it but I love low key that I was able to go into this one kinda blind cuz it was so good. Anne Malcom will give u pain is all I’m gonna say...more
This was fun like I loved the camaraderie of like the Kane brothers. I loved sloane as a character and while the book is definitely far fetched it wasThis was fun like I loved the camaraderie of like the Kane brothers. I loved sloane as a character and while the book is definitely far fetched it was a fun read. I’m sorry I simply don’t believe there’s this many like publically named serial killers in like the same areas like enough that u make a name out of catching them but whatever . Uhh I thought her name was dumb and naming urself feels so … however smut was good and I enjoyed reading this. Also Rowan is so boy obsessed love it...more
He calls her Dewdrop (bc she likes Mountain Dew) constantly including while they fuck.
Also her tits or breasts might as well be a main charaDnf @ 87%
He calls her Dewdrop (bc she likes Mountain Dew) constantly including while they fuck.
Also her tits or breasts might as well be a main character in the story bc we hear abt them way too much. They’re big we get it but every single character at some pt mentions her boobs it’s odd.
Lastly both of them act to stupid and not like real people for me I’m sorry. Like ok u quit ur job and the person u recommended said they’re housesitting (which y do u have house sit like ever these days) some rich guys appt and u just were like sure let’s switch. Then said rich man comes home and ur like not scared when he and other random men just come in and out of the house like huh. And then for him he just immediately lets this girl stay here where like she could’ve snooped and he’s a big bad fixer how did he not know that someone else had been living in his place like idk. Also their relationship goes way too fast escpacially on his end where he’s like oh yo we’re together now at like page 60 with no build up. Like what if she’s a spy idk. Not for me ...more
As much as I love single dad romances this one just didn’t hit for me.
1. I’m sorry but full grown adults doing a prank war I just couldn’t like u havAs much as I love single dad romances this one just didn’t hit for me.
1. I’m sorry but full grown adults doing a prank war I just couldn’t like u have jobs… 2. These ppl trauma dump so fast like how is it the second time I’m meeting u and ik u had an awful relationship with ur dad, ur mom has Alzheimer’s, and ur ex husband cheated on u and had a baby on u like I’m all for sharing but what?? 3. It is weird to offer parenting advice to a dad u don’t know…
Umm idk what this was tbh like smut ig but like it’s a mess. Idk towards the end I wasn’t even enjoying the smut anymore I was just like wtf is going Umm idk what this was tbh like smut ig but like it’s a mess. Idk towards the end I wasn’t even enjoying the smut anymore I was just like wtf is going on. ...more
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