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After You by Jojo Moyes
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I hate to upset fans of Me Before You (hell, I'm a huge fan of Me Before You), but this was a very underwhelming sequel. I think if you are expecting the emotional punch of the first book you are going to be sorely disappointed.

I'm not ashamed to say that Me Before You had me up reading until very late at night and then crying my eyes out until very early the next morning. It was the kind of book that sticks with you, the kind of book that is extremely hard to follow up. It ended on a very powerful note, so any book that calls itself a "sequel" has to match that kind of power. This didn't, not even close.

We follow Lou's life a year and a half after the death of Will, and we see what her life has become. Honestly, I didn't enjoy this Lou very much. Gone is any spark, any vitality, any humor, and without those aspects of her personality I had trouble staying engaged with her. I didn't like this pushover Lou, and I barely recognized her from the previous book.

Her life is wholly depressing. Lou is stuck completely in this sort of limbo, and reading about her mostly boring day to day things felt one-note and tedious. Lou's family details, like her mother's newfound feminism and her sister's meddling, seemed contrived and almost silly. I didn't get what those side plots added to the story, and I didn't find them compelling.

Lou's love interest was just... there. He was sexy in a classic romance way- the patient, motorcycle-riding savior- but I simply didn't feel the chemistry between him and Lou. It felt like a relationship without weight, certainly without the intensity of Lou's relationship with Will. If you are going to present a love interest to follow the one from Me Before You, it would have to be absolutely epic... this wasn't.

And don't get me started on Lily. No spoilers from me, but Lily just irritated me to no end. She was SO selfish, and I struggled to feel much sympathy for her rich-girl plight. I know the author tried to give us reasons to empathize with Lily, especially near the end with her convoluted backstory, but I was rooting for Lou to branch out and have more of the story-line to herself.

However, this book's greatest crime, IMO, was that it was boring. I kept putting this book down and starting other stories, only to force myself back to this one after a few hours. And though this book has brief moments of greatness, and it wasn't bad or offensive in any way, it also failed to grab me the way I was expecting it to. After the way Me Before You gripped me, I think this was the biggest let down of all.

**Copy provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review**


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Reading Progress

September 22, 2015 – Started Reading
September 22, 2015 – Shelved
September 22, 2015 – Shelved as: read-to-review-arc
September 22, 2015 – Shelved as: net-galley
September 23, 2015 –
3.0%
September 24, 2015 –
10.0% "Interesting start."
September 25, 2015 –
45.0%
September 26, 2015 –
50.0% "Slow going."
September 26, 2015 –
80.0%
September 27, 2015 – Shelved as: m-f
September 27, 2015 – Shelved as: little-to-no-sex-content
September 27, 2015 – Shelved as: full-of-angst
September 27, 2015 – Shelved as: contemporary
September 27, 2015 – Shelved as: chick-lit-women-s-fiction
September 27, 2015 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Joy (new) - rated it 3 stars

Joy I can't wait to read this! Look forward to your review.


message 2: by Jason (new) - added it

Jason Oh crap!


message 3: by Sheziss (new)

Sheziss Hahahaha, sorry for that, girl ;) .


message 4: by Connie (new)

Connie Cat The first book about killed me. But I didn't see a need for a sequel.


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) I'll write my review tonight. It was very underwhelming.


~✡~Dαni(ela) ♥ ♂♂ love & semi-colons~✡~ I'm not surprised to read this. Follow-ups to great books are rarely satisfying, and to me this was Will and Lou's story, so there's no story with Will gone.

Great review, though.


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) ~✡~Dαni(ela) ♥ ♂♂ love & semi-colons~✡~ wrote: "I'm not surprised to read this. Follow-ups to great books are rarely satisfying, and to me this was Will and Lou's story, so there's no story with Will gone.

Great review, though."


Thanks ;) I'm sure I'll get some flack from some lovers of the first book who can't imagine this book being bad. I agree that follow-up books rarely work. I always try them, though!!


Melanie eeek- I know you are being mega honest. i finished me before you at 1am and was hysterically crying.... makes me scared to read part 2!!


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Melanie wrote: "eeek- I know you are being mega honest. i finished me before you at 1am and was hysterically crying.... makes me scared to read part 2!!"

I am! You won't cry with this one. I was 100% dry-eyed! I cried for like 2 days with MBY.


message 10: by Piper (new) - added it

Piper Oh no! This is the first review I've seen for AY and I was so hoping for better news. I've been waiting anxiously. :(


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Piper wrote: "Oh no! This is the first review I've seen for AY and I was so hoping for better news. I've been waiting anxiously. :("

I've seen a couple others. One of my GR friends loved it and the other hated it. It's worth a shot! I just didn't really enjoy it.


message 12: by Mo (new) - added it

Mo Well, this doesn't sound promising. Nice review.


message 13: by Piper (new) - added it

Piper Heather K (dentist in my spare time) wrote: "Piper wrote: "Oh no! This is the first review I've seen for AY and I was so hoping for better news. I've been waiting anxiously. :("

I've seen a couple others. One of my GR friends loved it and..."


Well, seeing as I pre-ordered it, I guess I'll read it regardless. I should have waited. Someday I'll learn!! Thanks for your honesty, Heather. :)


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Mo wrote: "Well, this doesn't sound promising. Nice review."

Thanks- I try!


message 15: by Trisha (new)

Trisha Harrington Great review, Heather!


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Trisha wrote: "Great review, Heather!"

:) ;)


Wendys Wycked Words Awesome review !!


message 18: by Barbara (new)

Barbara Elsborg Ohh and I was looking forward to this one!


Debra ~~ seriously slacking on her reviews ~~ I wasn't happy when I heard this was coming out (sounded like an unnecessary money grab) and you just solidified that I won't read it except that I'm sure at some point someone will choose it for book club. Great review nonetheless. :)


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Wendy wrote: "Awesome review !!"

Thanks!


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Barbara wrote: "Ohh and I was looking forward to this one!"

I was too :(


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Debra wrote: "I wasn't happy when I heard this was coming out (sounded like an unnecessary money grab) and you just solidified that I won't read it except that I'm sure at some point someone will choose it for b..."

I'm sure they will. Thanks! I'm sure I'll get creamed on Amazon for it. My negative reviews of popular books always get down voted!


Debra ~~ seriously slacking on her reviews ~~ Heather K (dentist in my spare time) wrote: "Debra wrote: "I wasn't happy when I heard this was coming out (sounded like an unnecessary money grab) and you just solidified that I won't read it except that I'm sure at some point someone will c..."

All negative reviews get down voted on Amazon no matter how "helpful", valid and well reasoned. I'm not sure why they even have it. A helpful negative review should be voted up since it's not a "like" button but a "helpful" button right? I'll make sure to give you a thumbs up on this one. :)


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Debra wrote: "Heather K (dentist in my spare time) wrote: "Debra wrote: "I wasn't happy when I heard this was coming out (sounded like an unnecessary money grab) and you just solidified that I won't read it exce..."

Ha- you'll be the only one! ;)


Laura And if you noticed she is called Louisa most of the time. I guess our lovely Lou died with Will.


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Laura wrote: "And if you noticed she is called Louisa most of the time. I guess our lovely Lou died with Will."

True!


Sher❤ The Fabulous BookLover Fab review Heather!


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Share❤ wrote: "Fab review Heather!"

Thanks!


message 29: by Mary (new)

Mary Ovalle so she does not end up with will?


Heather K (dentist in my spare time) Maricel wrote: "so she does not end up with will?"

Did you read Me Before You?


Tiffany Gray I totally agree!!!!!!


Juana Same feelings here. It was a struggle to carry on reading and I eventually forced myself to speed up as I did not want to renew the loan for the umpteenth time. I loved MBY but this sequel simply left me with nothing once I finished it.


Angie I feel the same. This Lou, although understandably heartbroken and upset, is just not the Lou I imagined after Me Before You. She spent a majority of this book doing absolutely nothing. Although I did find Lily's backstory intriguing and I ended up sympathizing with her, I just couldn't help but feel as though Moyes forced this being into the story, and even though the words of her resemblance to her father were spoken in the book, I didn't feel it.


Katie Completely agree with everything you write here. Me Before You left me a huddled, sobbing mess...and it really changed the way I thought about assisted dying. This book was disappointing most of all because it didn't really evoke ANY kind of emotional response in me beyond, "hmm, that was ok."


message 35: by Amana (new) - added it

Amana Mentor How can I get to read the book?


Sherry Lindgren o. uu zmu ttu mmp


message 38: by Yang (new) - rated it 3 stars

Yang Hu Ohh that's exactly what I feel about the book!Although I only finished half of it I was already bored by the plot.


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