Maria11's Reviews > Dirty Dom

Not sure how I feel about this book. It needs an editor for sure. Lots of errors with capitalization and some grammar. I usually don't care too much about that, but they were so obvious.

I liked the plot, but there seemed less plot and too much sex. He just seemed to F her into submission anytime there was a conflict. He was way more crude then sexy. She just did what he said and after being such a strong woman she folded like a cheap napkin. She kept stating she wanted to be loved and held and all they did was screw hard. Very contradictory. Lots of inner dialogue and not much character dialogue.

Not bad but not good either. Oh well you might like it.