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When No One Is Watching by Alyssa Cole
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Hot Mess!! I am not sure what to say about this one. What started as an insightful look into gentrification, history, poverty, and racism turned into an off the rails thriller with no thrills for me. Any insight into the themes I picked up on was lost with that ending, and this story missed the mark for me.

Another story that fell victim to this over thinker and a case of the wrong reader for this one.

I received a copy from the publisher on EW.
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Reading Progress

August 19, 2020 – Shelved
January 17, 2021 – Started Reading
January 17, 2021 – Finished Reading

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Kelly (and the Book Boar) Hot mess is right. To me this was two entirely separate books merged together so poorly.


message 2: by Farrah (new)

Farrah Now I don't feel so bad about never getting around to reading this one 😁


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Kelly (and the Book Boar) wrote: "Hot mess is right. To me this was two entirely separate books merged together so poorly."

Kelly, Yes, thats what it felt like and makes me wonder if the author didn't plot her story.


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Farrah wrote: "Now I don't feel so bad about never getting around to reading this one 😁"

Farrah, yeah don't feel bad it might be a good thing. I don't like to discourage anyone from reading a book but sometimes we need a little help deciding what to read with those over loaded TBR lists.


Kristy Sorry this one didn't work for you, Brenda!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Kristy wrote: "Sorry this one didn't work for you, Brenda!"

Thank you, Kristy!


Tina (not receiving notifications!) Sorry this one was a miss for you Brenda.


Tina Loves To Read This one also did not work for me. Great review, and I hope your next read is a 5 star book.


Michael David (on hiatus) Sorry this one didn't work for you, Brenda! I hope you love your next read.


message 10: by Ceecee (new) - added it

Ceecee Oh dear. Hope you enjoy your next one Brenda!


message 11: by Jen (new) - rated it 4 stars

Jen Fair Brenda, it was a tough book to come to terms with, such different flows between the start and finish!


message 12: by Michelle (new)

Michelle Nice, honest review, Brenda! 💗 After reading so many reviews with the same complaint I have decided to skip this one.


preoccupiedbybooks I hope your next is a better match for you Brenda!


Brandice Great review Brenda, this one started off promising and interesting but the uneven pacing wore on me and the increasingly far-fetched actions near the end were a big negative too :-/ Hope you love your next read!


message 15: by Cheri (new)

Cheri Terrific, honest review for one that sounds like it was a bit of a disaster, Brenda! Yikes!


message 16: by Sheyla ✎ (new)

Sheyla ✎ Great honest review, Brenda,


message 17: by NZLisaM (new)

NZLisaM No thrills, no thank you. Thanks for the heads up, Brenda.


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Tina wrote: "Sorry this one was a miss for you Brenda."

Thank you, Tina!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Tina wrote: "This one also did not work for me. Great review, and I hope your next read is a 5 star book."

Thank you, Tina! I hope youa re reading something great right now!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Michael wrote: "Sorry this one didn't work for you, Brenda! I hope you love your next read."

Thank you, Michael!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Jen wrote: "Fair Brenda, it was a tough book to come to terms with, such different flows between the start and finish!"

Thank you for reading and discussing this one with me, Jen!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Michelle wrote: "Nice, honest review, Brenda! 💗 After reading so many reviews with the same complaint I have decided to skip this one."

Thank you, Michelle! I think it's a good one to skip!!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words preoccupiedbybooks wrote: "I hope your next is a better match for you Brenda!"

Thank you, Fran!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Brandice wrote: "Great review Brenda, this one started off promising and interesting but the uneven pacing wore on me and the increasingly far-fetched actions near the end were a big negative too :-/ Hope you love ..."

Thank you, Brandice! It really makes me wonder if the author plotted this story.


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Cheri wrote: "Terrific, honest review for one that sounds like it was a bit of a disaster, Brenda! Yikes!"

Thank you, Cheri! It's too bad it was a disaster but the is a good way to describe it!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Sheyla ✎ wrote: "Great honest review, Brenda,"

Thank you, Sheyla!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words NZLisaM wrote: "No thrills, no thank you. Thanks for the heads up, Brenda."

I am glad I could help, Lisa!!


message 28: by Canadian Jen (new)

Canadian Jen Boo. I hate books that disappoint. Hope your next one is better, Brenda!


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Jen wrote: "Boo. I hate books that disappoint. Hope your next one is better, Brenda!"

Thank you, Jen!


Melissa ~ Bantering Books Ha! Your review made me chuckle, Brenda. You know that I don't disagree with you about the ending. Fair review! :)


Brenda ~The Book Witch at Witch Words Melissa wrote: "Ha! Your review made me chuckle, Brenda. You know that I don't disagree with you about the ending. Fair review! :)"

Thank you, Melissa! And thank you for joining me and discussing this one!! I enjoyed chatting about this one with you!


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