Darran's Reviews > White Anvil: Sasquatch Onslaught

Look, you're not going to read this accidentally. You know what you're getting into. The story itself is OK. However, there seemed to be a lack of proper proofreading in the first half. One of the soldier's names changed literally one line later and there's a bit where an issue with a gun not firing was never addressed. "He'd checked the weapon before he left, and it had been fully loaded. With no time to resolve the problem..." Right that happens a lot does it? Bullets fell out did they?