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Cali Boy (The Loyal Boys, #1)
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I enjoyed the first 50% so much that it shocked me how much I hated the second half. What started off super sweet just devolved into mess after mess and so much ridiculousness that it feels like I read two separate stories basically. Eh and it probably didn’t help that I felt like the sex scenes weren’t well written either. It started off with insta lust and possessiveness which normally would bother me but I was so enamored with the characters that I didn’t care. Sigh. There was so much potential here!☹️
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Reading Progress
July 12, 2022
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July 12, 2022
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to-read
September 24, 2022
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Started Reading
September 24, 2022
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kindle-unlimited
September 24, 2022
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45.0%
"Aww this is super sweet🥰 Much sweeter than I was expecting for sure! Very enjoyable and exactly what I wanted to read at this time tbh."
September 24, 2022
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Finished Reading
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Sep 24, 2022 05:44PM
I agree.The second half was too drawn out and the whole bullying thing started to get on my nerves. Overall, it wasn't what I was expecting but I still liked the characters. I gave it 3 stars but honestly was more like 2.5. 😕 Hopefully her next one is better.
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L Ann wrote: "I agree.The second half was too drawn out and the whole bullying thing started to get on my nerves. Overall, it wasn't what I was expecting but I still liked the characters. I gave it 3 stars but h..."I VERY much agree!!! 😬😬😬 Yeah I like her writing and will definitely tune in for the next book!
i was excited for this because it’s stepbrothers and it has grumpy x sunshine and i heard it was cute lol so i was like yes adding!! but then i heard that the sex kinda became too much and took over a bigger part of the second half which is disappointing. i hate it when that happens. i’m not sure if i’m as interested as i was before but at least i’ll know what to expect, even if it still disappoints in the end. sorry you didn’t like it :/
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Im sorry this was a miss for you Marci 🥲🥲 But hoping the next book will be a hit for you! 💕
elena ❀ wrote: "i was excited for this because it’s stepbrothers and it has grumpy x sunshine and i heard it was cute lol so i was like yes adding!! but then i heard that the sex kinda became too much and took ove..."Thanks, Elena!❤️ I don’t think you’ll like this one. It got so ridiculous! The grumpy x sunshine was great at first tho.☹️ And tbh this didn’t feel taboo either to me.😅 bummer 😭
Lilly wrote: "Im sorry this was a miss for you Marci 🥲🥲 But hoping the next book will be a hit for you! 💕"Aw thank you!!💓 hope ur next books are great as well🥰
