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In His Arms
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bookshelves: tbr-kindle, tm_challenge_2013_in_2013, 3-star, ntm_author_2013
Feb 09, 2013
bookshelves: tbr-kindle, tm_challenge_2013_in_2013, 3-star, ntm_author_2013
02/21/2013 --
Overall Stars = 3 Stars
Book Cover / Book Blurb = 4 / 4 = 4 Stars
Writer’s Voice = 2.5 Stars
Character Development = 4 Stars
Story Appreciation = 3 Stars
Worth the Chili = 2 Stars [$7.00 Amazon & $7.43 on B&N]
Okay, I feel a bit guilty for giving an average rating to a book that took courage to write. The topic needs to be screamed from the rooftops, my opinion only. Human trafficking, in particular, the kidnapping of a teenage girl from the front of her home and then her story. Eleven long years of captivity. The topic gets 5 HUGE STARS from me, however the execution could have been better.
What I thought worked really well:
1 -- Obviously the topic. I think the author captured the abduction and living situation very well. This is a story that plays out too often with very little known about it. I commend this author for bringing us this story.
2 -- A good third of the book, very beginning, is one very long intimate scene. There were parts I didn't like about it, and you'll see that in a minute, but this one scene of intimacy was some of the best I've ever read.
3 -- I liked the cover and the blurb. Got me to read it almost immediately. Look at my TBR pile -- yep, to be commended.
But, the things that didn't work for me interfered with my enjoyment:
1 -- The intimate scene mentioned above? It has a obnoxious voyeur. This was explained, but I didn't buy this guys presence in everything during their first meeting. Just annoying as hell. The character also wasn't drawn for us well. Beef him up a bit and give him a bit of personality, and maybe it works.
2 -- The author deviated into the mundane and the story got incredibly boring about 2/3's in. Hard to keep going when you really know how it is going to turn out. No surprises.
3 -- As much as I liked RJ, I didn't think his story well told. Not enough depth when he could have been incredible he only turned out so/so.
4 -- Overall, with this stories topic, the story lacked depth. We had the whole Nicky element, but we only had him in two real scenes. Just too much surface, very little depth. Told me how to feel but I didn't feel it.
5 -- Therefore, the story was too long. Probably could have lost about 70 pages and been much better.
I did enjoy the story. I do think this could have been an incredible story that turned out mediocre. Could have been the author, could have been the editing, could have been the publisher's requirements. Whatever the reason, I was a bit sad. It just could have been so much better.
BTW: I've noted this very type of format issue [lack of depth] with this publisher in the past. I rather think Ellora's Cave plays a key role in the mediocrity mentioned above.
Happy Reading!
Overall Stars = 3 Stars
Book Cover / Book Blurb = 4 / 4 = 4 Stars
Writer’s Voice = 2.5 Stars
Character Development = 4 Stars
Story Appreciation = 3 Stars
Worth the Chili = 2 Stars [$7.00 Amazon & $7.43 on B&N]
Okay, I feel a bit guilty for giving an average rating to a book that took courage to write. The topic needs to be screamed from the rooftops, my opinion only. Human trafficking, in particular, the kidnapping of a teenage girl from the front of her home and then her story. Eleven long years of captivity. The topic gets 5 HUGE STARS from me, however the execution could have been better.
What I thought worked really well:
1 -- Obviously the topic. I think the author captured the abduction and living situation very well. This is a story that plays out too often with very little known about it. I commend this author for bringing us this story.
2 -- A good third of the book, very beginning, is one very long intimate scene. There were parts I didn't like about it, and you'll see that in a minute, but this one scene of intimacy was some of the best I've ever read.
3 -- I liked the cover and the blurb. Got me to read it almost immediately. Look at my TBR pile -- yep, to be commended.
But, the things that didn't work for me interfered with my enjoyment:
1 -- The intimate scene mentioned above? It has a obnoxious voyeur. This was explained, but I didn't buy this guys presence in everything during their first meeting. Just annoying as hell. The character also wasn't drawn for us well. Beef him up a bit and give him a bit of personality, and maybe it works.
2 -- The author deviated into the mundane and the story got incredibly boring about 2/3's in. Hard to keep going when you really know how it is going to turn out. No surprises.
3 -- As much as I liked RJ, I didn't think his story well told. Not enough depth when he could have been incredible he only turned out so/so.
4 -- Overall, with this stories topic, the story lacked depth. We had the whole Nicky element, but we only had him in two real scenes. Just too much surface, very little depth. Told me how to feel but I didn't feel it.
5 -- Therefore, the story was too long. Probably could have lost about 70 pages and been much better.
I did enjoy the story. I do think this could have been an incredible story that turned out mediocre. Could have been the author, could have been the editing, could have been the publisher's requirements. Whatever the reason, I was a bit sad. It just could have been so much better.
BTW: I've noted this very type of format issue [lack of depth] with this publisher in the past. I rather think Ellora's Cave plays a key role in the mediocrity mentioned above.
Happy Reading!
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Reading Progress
February 9, 2013
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February 9, 2013
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tbr-kindle
February 19, 2013
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Started Reading
February 21, 2013
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tm_challenge_2013_in_2013
February 21, 2013
– Shelved as:
3-star
February 21, 2013
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ntm_author_2013
February 21, 2013
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Finished Reading
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Feb 21, 2013 09:47PM
Love the review!!:))
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Dd wrote: "Love the review!!:))"Thanks!
Points 1 and 3 I really have to agree with.1 His presence didn't add anything and he could just have easily been outside the room. He made me more uncomfortable than he did them.
3 RJ was woefully underdeveloped and really never did get a chance to do very much. That might have made it more realistic but kind of took some of the fun out of it.
I am glad that you at least somewhat liked it but now I have to find a 5-star book to recommend to you. :)
Michael wrote: "Points 1 and 3 I really have to agree with.1 His presence didn't add anything and he could just have easily been outside the room. He made me more uncomfortable than he did them.
3 RJ was woeful..."
I'll be here. The 5 Stars are few and far between for us. I'll keep my eyes out for you too.
Did you ever try Sempre -- I think you did, but can't remember. Guess I could look it up :o|
You know another thing I should have added, the total lack of condom mention. I thought the lack of use a huge oversight and just gross in this situation. They even mentioned the whole birth control thing when they talked briefly about Nicky. I really hate to see this in a book with so much profligate sexual activity for one or both parties [guess I should really say all parties]. Not very responsible.
Michelle wrote: "You know another thing I should have added, the total lack of condom mention."My impression was that the kind of men who would take Anthony up on his offer were the kind who didn't care to wear a condom. If the girl got pregnant, they were confident it would be taken care of. Pretty much like Ian in Slave.
