Talk:Johnny Jeter/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:22, 5 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

The article is close to a GA, though I found a few issues with it:

  • The lead is a bit confusing in its flow. Namely, "which led to him signing with WWE. In 2004, he began competing in tag team competition with Matt Cappotelli where" makes it sound like the team was formed in WWE rather than OVW, and just before that, "He began working for Ohio Valley Wrestling (OVW), which led to him signing with WWE." <- wouldn't you have to be signed with WWE to work in OVW to begin with?
  • If you can, make the Spirit Squad section a bit more based on Johnny. His role didn't seem to be that big though, so if it can't be done don't worry about it.
  • There's virtually no personal life info. I can understand not too much, but beyond the one sentence in the section is there really nothing you can add?
    • Barring Dykstra and now Nemeth, the other three Spirit Squad members did virtually no interviews (that I can find anyway), and info about their personal lives is severely restricted. Usually, Canadian Online Explorer will have some info on their early lives or something, but they launch straight into Jeter's wrestling career.

I'll put the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:22, 5 March 2010 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. ♥NiciVampireHeart20:00, 6 March 2010 (UTC)Reply
No problem. Everything checks out, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 20:43, 6 March 2010 (UTC)Reply