**spoiler alert** Slightly disappointed and here’s why.
If the story was only about their relationship then yes end the story here. However because the**spoiler alert** Slightly disappointed and here’s why.
If the story was only about their relationship then yes end the story here. However because the main plot to me was saving Haret and such, then perhaps the books should continue. There are SO MANY loose ends.
Things not addressed or we don’t see completed: What happens with all of Haret. We barely even touch on the shit show that is Jai’s fam and city his Aunt overtook. We know aunt is plotting something but the author shoves this away. What of Dr. F? What about the Dragons? Will they becoming back or getting their memory? Why was finding the Qilin so important? Like aside from the few things they needed more for?
There is just so much missing. It felt incomplete.
On the relationship front everything is great, though I’d like to see them honeymoon and such. But still in a Haret as a whole front things are incomplete....more
So this is an interesting book to say the least. It starts off with Mari going to college and some dude falling asleep in her lap!! He is super cute oSo this is an interesting book to say the least. It starts off with Mari going to college and some dude falling asleep in her lap!! He is super cute ok well hot and she runs away from him. She over hears him tell his friends that he wants to date her that she is the one or something. But she hears the number of women he has dated and it would make her number 24 so she tries to avoid him only to have him cross her path and become persistent to asking her out. Eventually she accepts after finding out what a really great guy he is. But there is still something about him that is a mystery.
I love the cast of characters and I especially love Ty, he is such a kind and sweet person and to find out his past was the way it is broke my heart. Seth is a kind and smart guy and I really enjoy him around as well. Dee on the other hand I can't pin and have very little contact and exposure to that I couldn't say something about him one way or the other.
The mystery behind the story is definitely intriguing I enjoyed the answers that we got, but obviously we didn't get the full answers yet. So I still have a dump truck full of unanswered questions. The story was decently written however there were still some typos in the story to some wording where an extra word was thrown in or missing which sometimes made it difficult for me to understand what was being said. A couple typos the word feel was supposed to be fell I believe. So it might just just a bit more editing. Overall though aside from the typos the flow of the story matched what I've come to like from books. I enjoy minimal details about surroundings, more dialogue and it was paced in a manner I could enjoy and keep engaged with. I thought the CRUSH games were awesome and very smart and especially the way that Mari handled them. She is a very likable character as well. Overall I really enjoyed the story and can't wait to see what happened next. In the end of the book we get a sneak preview of what's to come and let's just say I want to know what happens like right now.
* I was given a copy of this book for my honest review. All opinions expressed are completely my own. Thank you to the author for giving me the chance to read the book! ...more
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