F. This book. Seriously. DO NOT BOTHER. Omg this was HORRIBLE. Ok. So. 1: they treat her like GARBAGE 2: they don’t like her AT ALL 3: they FORCE SEX - F. This book. Seriously. DO NOT BOTHER. Omg this was HORRIBLE. Ok. So. 1: they treat her like GARBAGE 2: they don’t like her AT ALL 3: they FORCE SEX - RIGHT AWAY 4: NONE of them are nice or funny or sweet- it’s not like you have one or two that are bad. But no. None of them are nice. It’s SO BAD 5: they play the “you don’t know anything” game and it’s annoying 6: she’s SO WEAK and is not given any strength.
Skip it. This book was so bad I can’t even function. I need a break from reading. I RARLEY hate a book. But I legit can’t with this. At all. So. So bad.
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F. This book. Seriously. DO NOT BOTHER. Omg this was HORRIBLE. Ok. So. 1: they treat her like GARBAGE 2: they don’t like her AT ALL 3: they FORCE SEX - RIGHT AWAY 4: NONE of them are nice or funny or sweet- it’s not like you have one or two that are bad. But no. None of them are nice. It’s SO BAD 5: they play the “you don’t know anything” game and it’s annoying 6: she’s SO WEAK and is not given any strength.
Skip it. This book was so bad I can’t even function. I need a break from reading. I RARLEY hate a book. But I legit can’t with this. At all. So. So bad....more
I tried to like it but I just didn’t. I 100% loved the representation of a FMC with anxiety and the fact that the MMCs are working men and not like miI tried to like it but I just didn’t. I 100% loved the representation of a FMC with anxiety and the fact that the MMCs are working men and not like millionaires. But this book made NO SENSE. We get ZERO backstory and are thrown into Jacks personality (which is fun and wacky) and are not explained Why he is like this. The other men are flat and seem like they do not care at all if they have an omega in the house or outside of it. They all just exist together but not together at all. It was hard to get into because it felt like someone was telling me a story of a story they heard —— so like.
If you went to a friend and they then told you about this story and you’re getting half the info but supposed to CARE about the people your friend cares about. It was just not great.
I could have used some depth and angst and just. Freaking. Something to cling to besides this girl has an iguana. ...more
So at 34% in the main conflict of an unregistered omega is solved And her conflict of not really wanting a pack is solved (ish) And she’s having spicySo at 34% in the main conflict of an unregistered omega is solved And her conflict of not really wanting a pack is solved (ish) And she’s having spicy times
Why is this book 480 pages ????
This was cute, but it could have easily been half the amount of pages and had the exact same outcome feeling, and flow that this one did
Because this was so long, I skimmed a lot There was a lot of space when it felt like the characters motivations should have been elsewhere
The conflict felt like they came out of nowhere and thrown in so that the book wasn’t boring, but it kind of felt disjointed
It was OK. It wasn’t great. It was definitely a omega verse. There is no dark to this book. I think that it would have been the amount of pages. It would’ve been a four star and a good pallet cleanser but because it’s so long I was bored for at least 150 pages of this book....more
Ughhhh. This was some high school writing and drama
It read like a fanfiction that wanted to be this big world building standalone reverse harem
But thUghhhh. This was some high school writing and drama
It read like a fanfiction that wanted to be this big world building standalone reverse harem
But the world is never built and I absolutely cannot get into it with the writing style and how incredibly lame everybody is on top of that new Nebraska is never fun Why was this this way?
It’s a horrible name are you telling me this author didn’t have one single friend that was like hey pick a different state ...more
You know what. I’m just not a fan of her FMC’s. They have no backbone. They whine and let others walk all over them. Then let an apology be the endingYou know what. I’m just not a fan of her FMC’s. They have no backbone. They whine and let others walk all over them. Then let an apology be the ending- no grovel (in this case her dad) the mmc’s are like. Too perfect and no real angst or emotion. The stepmom gets NOTHING bad. It’s so unsatisfying. Just not that good and almost 600 pages of nothing but constantly being walked on. Just. Poor story telling. ...more
Easy read. No depth. Poor spice. Ok plot but I didn’t care about anyone really. Jack was an ass her whole childhood and his flashback made me more angEasy read. No depth. Poor spice. Ok plot but I didn’t care about anyone really. Jack was an ass her whole childhood and his flashback made me more angry than accepting. Over all. 2.5. Rounded up for the slight humor. ...more
So. SO fluffy. No angst. No romance. Lots of spice. Half drawn out characters and no satisfying justice for the asshole pack. FMC kind of gets walked So. SO fluffy. No angst. No romance. Lots of spice. Half drawn out characters and no satisfying justice for the asshole pack. FMC kind of gets walked on by the big bad and the mmc’s are nice but one dimensional. ...more
Ok. I was into it and then the whole no Seeing them thing was LONG WINDED. Then they get out def by the stupid ex abuser and it’s so annoying and a HUGOk. I was into it and then the whole no Seeing them thing was LONG WINDED. Then they get out def by the stupid ex abuser and it’s so annoying and a HUGE info dump. The big bad is an ass and his whole ploy is stupid. I get that the point was to finally have shep and her get closer and to have the guys figure out life And the reveal of their faces was ok. Kinda cute. Kinda lazy. The ending felt super rushed and the ex getting NOTHING bad was unsatisfying. ...more
You have to go into this being ready for a character driven book with really no plot and 90% spice
Unfortunately, the spice ends up being pretty boringYou have to go into this being ready for a character driven book with really no plot and 90% spice
Unfortunately, the spice ends up being pretty boring towards the end because it feels like that’s all you’re getting and there’s not much of a plot or growth. It’s just kind of novella style, Insta lust and Insta love.
Also, check your triggers because it is definitely consensual nonconsent I don’t know it was OK this was OK. It definitely wasn’t a reread....more
This woman can do no wrong. I would literally read a grocery list from her think yes this was 10 out of 10.
The female character is always bad ass. TheThis woman can do no wrong. I would literally read a grocery list from her think yes this was 10 out of 10.
The female character is always bad ass. The men are always super in love with her. The communication and romance is top-tier. The spice is heavy and seductive. It’s just all around a good read....more
Save yourself, the read it is literally foreman spending the majority of the book just wanting to have sex with her and having sex with her The female Save yourself, the read it is literally foreman spending the majority of the book just wanting to have sex with her and having sex with her The female main character spending the entire book, wondering how anyone could want to have sex with her Then the four men three of them do a horrible thing, and literally think that she is a terrible terrible human yell at her. Call her a liar tell her if she doesn’t love them freak out on her and I kid you not the next day just get on their knees and say sorry after it’s proven that she didn’t do the thing they thought she did and she just let it go. There is no gravel. It is literally just oh OK.
“Please. Help me. Let me go. I have two younger sisters I’m looking out for “ CHUCKLES. “Why are you working Xmas eve don’t you have someone?” Like. Du“Please. Help me. Let me go. I have two younger sisters I’m looking out for “ CHUCKLES. “Why are you working Xmas eve don’t you have someone?” Like. Dude. SHE JUST TOLD you !! This book was bad. Like. Bad bad. ...more
Ew. Like. Legit. Ew. They fought over her like children. She’s barely 19. They are late 30’s to early 40’s. It was just. Weird. I don’t mind an age gaEw. Like. Legit. Ew. They fought over her like children. She’s barely 19. They are late 30’s to early 40’s. It was just. Weird. I don’t mind an age gap but this was three men acting like teens. It was just. Nope. ...more