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The Sentence by Louise Erdrich
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To my dear Goodreads friends that adored this book, I apologize for having to sit out this particular dance. It’s not that I loathed it; I just didn’t feel particularly moved by it. I didn’t want to get out of my chair and let loose. The rhythm threw me off quite often, and the character of the tune was just too angular for my taste. I prefer something a bit more lyrical. The two biggest problems that created such dissonance for me: a ghost and a pandemic.

“Flora died on the second of November, All Souls’ Day, when the fabric between the worlds is thin as tissue and easily torn. Since then, she has been here every morning.”

A ghost haunting a bookstore is rather alluring to this reader, in theory. But in practice, I just couldn’t buy it. Not that I’m opposed to ghost stories (see my review of Rebecca if you don’t believe me!). I like my ghosts a bit more subtle, and Flora was too over the top for me - as was the main character, Tookie. After finishing the book, I have no real good picture of this Ojibwe woman who had been imprisoned, released early, and who then sought refuge as an employee of a bookstore. Perhaps my imagination is failing me these days, but I had a better impression of some of her coworkers than I did of Tookie herself. But, I have to admit that I was absolutely on board with the interactions between the store employees as well as Tookie’s passion for books and reading. Who wouldn’t be?!

“Alone, I had to get out of my surroundings the way I used to in prison. There, I had learned to read with a force that resembled insanity. Once free, I found that I could not read just any book. It had gotten so I could see through books—the little ruses, the hooks, the setup in the beginning, the looming weight of a tragic ending, the way at the last page the author could whisk out the carpet of sorrow and restore a favorite character. I needed the writing to have a certain mineral density. It had to feel naturally meant, but not cynically contrived. I grew to dislike manipulations.”

This story takes place in contemporary Minneapolis. And yes, the pandemic did in fact come to town, just as it paid a visit to every other corner of the globe. This is where the real trouble began for me personally. I’ve worked in the public sector throughout. I have been fortunate to have been working not just with people but with books, too. The books were a lot easier to get along with during the pandemic. The people… well, I’m sure you can guess that this was a mixed bag. I simply was not ready to read about it yet. It’s just too fresh in my mind. In three weeks, a vote will be made regarding a significant expansion to our library. Some of the ugly heads are rearing themselves once again in protest. This time the issue is taxes, but the rude behavior is not all that different to that seen during the previous two years. What I’m trying to say in too many words is that the timing was simply cursed on my part.

“The things people did to one another and to themselves wore him down.”

I’m sure it’s obvious that this is a case of “it’s not you, it’s me”. Please read some other reviews. Louise Erdrich has an important story to tell, and many people will take away a whole lot more than I did. The writing is always competent. I like her stories best when I learn something about indigenous identity and history as well as the natural world. Needless to say, with the novel being set in the author’s own real-life bookstore, Birchbark Books, I’m inclined to pay a visit next time I find myself in the Midwest.

“As it turned out, books were important, like food, fuel, heat, garbage collection, snow shoveling, and booze.”
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Reading Progress

January 8, 2022 – Shelved
January 8, 2022 – Shelved as: to-read
January 8, 2022 – Shelved as: contemporary-literary
January 8, 2022 – Shelved as: magical-realism
January 8, 2022 – Shelved as: native-american
March 28, 2022 – Started Reading
April 6, 2022 – Finished Reading

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message 1: by Cheri (new)

Cheri This has been on my list to read for a long time, Candi. Looking forward to your thoughts on this!


Candi Cheri wrote: "This has been on my list to read for a long time, Candi. Looking forward to your thoughts on this!"

Cheri, it's nice and light for me right now :) :)


Bonnie G. Sorry it did not work for you, Candi! Just wondering if you have read Erdrich before. She has a very particular voice that absolutely does not work for everyone.


message 4: by Barbara K. (new)

Barbara K. Great observations, Candi. I find that it’s just not that uncommon for a book that, by all rights I should like, to leave me cold. You’re entitled!


Lorna A very thoughtful review of a book you found lacking, Candi. I’m sorry that you struggled with the book but on to the next, right. I think you have a few to pick from. :)


message 6: by Sara (new) - added it

Sara I will leave this on the TBR but not be in any rush to get to it, Candi. I have a strange relationship with Erdrich, sometimes I really like her and sometimes I just don't. Have never been able to nail down what it is that sometimes connects and sometimes doesn't.

Sometimes too close to home is the problem. On to a great book next!


message 7: by Laura (new) - added it

Laura I used to read her when I was a teenager but I already know Erdrich lacks subtlety for my reading tastes now. So in complete agreement with your review 😊.


message 8: by Jenn (new)

Jenn I appreciate your honest thoughts here, Candi. I've been on the fence about this one for a while as I tend to run hot and cold with Erdrich as well. I LOVED The Round House and have heard excellent things about the Pulitzer-winning The Night Watchman. I'll plan to make that one my next Erdrich. ;)


Diane Barnes I assigned this for my book club, since we're all retired booksellers. Most of them loved it, I just liked it. I agree, the ghost didn't do it for me. I loved the interactions of the clerks and the customers, the pandemic parts were interesting since the whole country was experiencing the same thing, but overall a letdown for me.


message 10: by Jenna (new)

Jenna ❤ ❀  ❤ Wonderful review, Candi, though I'm sorry the timing wasn't right for you with this one. As for books being easier to get along with during the pandemic, I'd say they are easier during all times!


message 11: by Antoinette (new)

Antoinette It’s always difficult I find when so many people you usually agree with loved a book and you didn’t. But that’s ok. Sometimes it’s not the right book or not the right time. It’s happened to me recently, so I get it. But you did explain your reasons well, Candi!


message 12: by Pedro (last edited Apr 26, 2022 01:40PM) (new)

Pedro Candi, I honestly don't understand why would someone want to write a novel about a pandemic that apparently isn't even over yet. I don't want to read about that crap at least till 2047. What are they writing about anyway? All the crap they heard on the news? Or are they coming up with their own studies and conclusions?! Well, I'm getting very angry already just by writing this. I better stop.

Excellent review, friend.
Sorry you didn't like it more.

(As you know, I couldn't finish The Night Watchman)


message 13: by Lisa (new) - rated it 5 stars

Lisa Which books speak to us is always so personal. I'm sorry you didn't love this one more, and it happens. I hope you are loving your current reads.


message 14: by Lori (new)

Lori  Keeton I'm not sure a book tinged with pandemic tones and a ghost would work well for me either. Sorry this wasn't what you expected right now.


Margaret M - (too far behind to catch up although trying to spend more time on GR) Terrific honest review Candi 💜


Candi Bonnie G. wrote: "Sorry it did not work for you, Candi! Just wondering if you have read Erdrich before. She has a very particular voice that absolutely does not work for everyone."

It happens, Bonnie! Erdrich is an author I really feel I should get on with a bit more than I do. This is the third work I've read. LaRose was my first and it encouraged me to continue. I didn't quite fall for The Beet Queen but was pretty determined to find something I would like. The timing of this was the biggest problem for me. Is it possible that the fourth time's a charm?! :D I'm going to give it some time though :)


Candi Barbara K wrote: "Great observations, Candi. I find that it’s just not that uncommon for a book that, by all rights I should like, to leave me cold. You’re entitled!"

Thank you, Barbara! Yes, that's exactly how I felt - it seemed I should have liked this a whole lot more! I'll have to give myself a break here :D


Candi Lorna wrote: "A very thoughtful review of a book you found lacking, Candi. I’m sorry that you struggled with the book but on to the next, right. I think you have a few to pick from. :)"

I appreciate your kind comment, Lorna. I had reservations starting this, but I had high hopes they'd be set aside. It happens. And you're right - plenty more to pluck from the stash! :D


Bonnie G. Candi wrote: "Bonnie G. wrote: "Sorry it did not work for you, Candi! Just wondering if you have read Erdrich before. She has a very particular voice that absolutely does not work for everyone."

It happens, Bon..."


IMO LaRose and Beet Queen are two of the very best of Erdrich so if those didn't work it really sounds like she is probably not the right author for you. Luckily there are plenty of others out there.


message 20: by Violeta (new)

Violeta Yes, 'books are important' but we can live without pandemic-themed books for a while, at least until the whole thing is well behind us.
I agree with your reasoning 100%; terrific review, Candi!


message 21: by Mark (new)

Mark Porton Great review Candi, I loved the dancing analogy at the start of your review, now you tell me - did you at least tap your feet? I am still envious of you working with books all day, you're right books always treat us okay don't they - how can one not love books? Amazing the protests about people not being willing to cough up taxes to pay for a library extension - I wish they'd realise just how valuable these places are for a society. What s this aversion to taxes - we need public services, and we need to pay for them?? Grrrrrr....


message 22: by Bianca (new) - added it

Bianca Terrific review, Candi. I've seen mixed reviews for this one. It's just been shortlistes for the Women's prize for fiction. I'm to read Erdrich.


Sujoya - theoverbookedbibliophile Fabulous review,Candi! Sorry this wasn't a satisfying read!


Candi Sara wrote: "I will leave this on the TBR but not be in any rush to get to it, Candi. I have a strange relationship with Erdrich, sometimes I really like her and sometimes I just don't. Have never been able to ..."

It sounds like we have a similar problem, Sara. I really couldn't say if this one would appeal to you or not then. And yes, it was all too familiar sounding in places for my comfort at the moment :D I did manage to read an excellent book right after, so I'm still a content reader :)


Candi Laura wrote: "I used to read her when I was a teenager but I already know Erdrich lacks subtlety for my reading tastes now. So in complete agreement with your review 😊."

That's probably exactly it, Laura - it wasn't just the ghost that lacked subtlety, but the writing in general. Maybe it's just not my style. I'm glad I'm not alone :)


Candi Jenn wrote: "I appreciate your honest thoughts here, Candi. I've been on the fence about this one for a while as I tend to run hot and cold with Erdrich as well. I LOVED The Round House and have heard excellent..."

Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Jenn. I'll pick her up one more time, in the future, and it will be The Round House since I'm determined to one day clear it off my physical bookshelf!


Candi Diane wrote: "I assigned this for my book club, since we're all retired booksellers. Most of them loved it, I just liked it. I agree, the ghost didn't do it for me. I loved the interactions of the clerks and the..."

In theory I should have loved this, Diane! A bookstore setting?! Yes, please :D The interactions between the clerks and with their customers did ring true, and that was probably my favorite part - that and the general talk about books :)


Brandice Great review Candi, sorry this didn’t work well for you! This was my first Erdrich book and I loved it! I’ve mostly been avoiding any books that mention the pandemic and usually ghost stories are not of interest to me but surprisingly, this one worked really well — Maybe because I didn’t feel one single element overpowered the story? I am reading The Night Watchman>/i> next. Hope you love your next book!


message 29: by Chris (new)

Chris Wonderful review. I've only read two of her works, one I didn't like at all and the other was good but not necessarily my cup of tea.


Angela M is taking a break. Sorry it didn’t work for you, Candi. Maybe some of her earlier books might.


Candi Jenna wrote: "Wonderful review, Candi, though I'm sorry the timing wasn't right for you with this one. As for books being easier to get along with during the pandemic, I'd say they are easier during all times!"

Thank you, Jenna! Yeah, I hoped I would be able to get over the hurdle, but I stumbled. Yes - those books are always kind and generous - never rude! :D


message 32: by Wyndy (new)

Wyndy I’ve yet to read Louise Erdrich and will plan to start somewhere else based on your review. I do love your closing quote selection, though ;-) Diane B. suggested starting with ‘The Master Butchers Singing Club.’ Which is your favorite of her novels?


Candi Antoinette wrote: "It’s always difficult I find when so many people you usually agree with loved a book and you didn’t. But that’s ok. Sometimes it’s not the right book or not the right time. It’s happened to me rece..."

I told myself it was too soon, Antoinette, but then I hoped the book would prove me wrong :D Oh well. It's not that it was a bad book; just not for me at the moment. Thanks a bunch!


Candi Pedro wrote: "Candi, I honestly don't understand why would someone want to write a novel about a pandemic that apparently isn't even over yet. I don't want to read about that crap at least till 2047. What are th..."

Pedro, trust me, I won't ever send you a book recommendation about anything regarding the pandemic or anything remotely like it :D It's certainly not historical fiction and the way things look around my area it's very much contemporary yet. Let's think about Michael Cunningham and Elizabeth Strout's books when these get us down :) :)

Thank you very much, friend!


Candi Lisa wrote: "Which books speak to us is always so personal. I'm sorry you didn't love this one more, and it happens. I hope you are loving your current reads."

So true, Lisa. If every book worked for every reader, then we wouldn't need half the books that are out there! By now I can pretty well predict what will suit me and what won't. Although, judging by the size of my list, you'd think I believed everything suited me :D :D I'm enjoying the books I have going right now :) Thank you!


Candi Lori wrote: "I'm not sure a book tinged with pandemic tones and a ghost would work well for me either. Sorry this wasn't what you expected right now."

If you are even a little bit hesitant, Lori, then I would suggest you give it some time! Plenty of other friends love her other work, so there's always that to turn to for now :) :)


Candi Margaret M wrote: "Terrific honest review Candi 💜"

Many thanks for your kind comment, Margaret!


Charles "Flora was too over the top for me," she says. Yeah. She was also under the counter, and peeking through the window, and good riddance with her. :P Great review!


Candi "IMO LaRose and Beet Queen are two of the very best of Erdrich so if those didn't work it really sounds like she is probably not the right author for you. Luckily there are plenty of others out there."

Well, it's quite possible that Erdrich and I are out of sync with one another, Bonnie :D Though I did enjoy LaRose a whole lot more comparatively :) Yes, my enormous list attests to the fact there are plenty of choices :D :D


Candi Violeta wrote: "Yes, 'books are important' but we can live without pandemic-themed books for a while, at least until the whole thing is well behind us.
I agree with your reasoning 100%; terrific review, Candi!"


Thanks so much, Violeta! Books are important and helpful when they can transport us! I felt a bit stuck, perhaps frozen in time while reading this one, I guess :D


message 41: by Candi (last edited Apr 28, 2022 05:10AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Candi Mark wrote: "Great review Candi, I loved the dancing analogy at the start of your review, now you tell me - did you at least tap your feet? I am still envious of you working with books all day, you're right boo..."

Thank you, Mark! I'm afraid my feet were quite still. A bit like a wallflower I guess :D But don't pay any attention to me if this one sounds good to you! Books are a pleasure to work with, and I wish more people understood the value of reading and libraries. There is a whole lot more to them than just a place to sign out a book! :)


Candi Bianca wrote: "Terrific review, Candi. I've seen mixed reviews for this one. It's just been shortlistes for the Women's prize for fiction. I'm to read Erdrich."

Many thanks, Bianca! I'd be interested to see what else is on that list and will head there after posting here :) I'd be interested in your thoughts on Erdrich when you get around to her!


Candi Sujoya wrote: "Fabulous review,Candi! Sorry this wasn't a satisfying read!"

Thank you, Sujoya! Just a matter of personal taste with this one, I believe :)


Candi Brandice wrote: "Great review Candi, sorry this didn’t work well for you! This was my first Erdrich book and I loved it! I’ve mostly been avoiding any books that mention the pandemic and usually ghost stories are n..."

Thanks, Brandice! I'm glad it worked so well for you, despite your own hesitations :) One never knows until she tries! I hope The Night Watchman proves just as gratifying.


Candi Chris wrote: "Wonderful review. I've only read two of her works, one I didn't like at all and the other was good but not necessarily my cup of tea."

Thank you, Chris. Well, it sounds like the two of us might be on the same page regarding Erdrich's work. I really want to find one I love, but who knows??!


Candi Angela M wrote: "Sorry it didn’t work for you, Candi. Maybe some of her earlier books might."

It happens, Angela. Well, I read The Beet Queen and wasn't quite dazzled either. If I make a go for it again, it will be The Round House :)


Candi Wyndy wrote: "I’ve yet to read Louise Erdrich and will plan to start somewhere else based on your review. I do love your closing quote selection, though ;-) Diane B. suggested starting with ‘The Master Butchers ..."

There were definitely some moments and passages that stood out for me here, Wyndy. Still... I squirmed when it came to the ghost and virus :D I've only read three of her books to date, but so far LaRose has been my favorite.


Candi Charles wrote: ""Flora was too over the top for me," she says. Yeah. She was also under the counter, and peeking through the window, and good riddance with her. :P Great review!"

Haha! Yes, Charles, she popped up everywhere, didn't she?! :D I like my ghosts to scare me, but this one was just a stone in my shoe ;) Thanks so much!


Bonnie G. Candi wrote: "Charles wrote: ""Flora was too over the top for me," she says. Yeah. She was also under the counter, and peeking through the window, and good riddance with her. :P Great review!"

Haha! Yes, Charle..."


You may want to look at Flora a bit differently -- Erdrich is Ojibwe, as was Tookie, and Ojibwe spirits are not necessarily scary. They are presences, sometimes comforting, sometimes annoying, sometimes other things, which people carry with them. Spirits watch, and their displeasure or contentment is felt by those who are living. People need to be in communication with those sprits (not always connected to dead humans, often they are animals or earth or air) to identify what is displeasing and find ways to create contentment. The ghosts are not aberrations, and they are not like characters in a haunted house, they are part of everyday living.


Candi Yes I did understand it that way, Bonnie, and I find the spiritual aspect of the culture to be very interesting. It worked a lot better for me when I read LaRose and I learned a lot then. For some reason it didn’t work as well here. Perhaps because I was already cranky 😉

I guess I prefer ghosts in my fiction to be of a different variety and should stick to non-fiction when I want to learn more about the spiritual and natural elements when it comes to the culture 🙂


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