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355 pages, Hardcover
First published May 3, 2016
She slipped her hand into his, and when he laced their fingers together, her entire traitor body flushed. She ducked her head, pretending not to notice the bursts of happiness exploding in her chest.
But with her life—and her family—on the line, love could be Em’s deadliest mistake.Could be. Would be. Is. You guys know what happens. Without even reading the book, I guarantee you guys know what happens as soon as you read that sentence from the blurb.
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THE GOOD THINGS!
THE BAD THINGS!
**3.5 stars**
I hate to spoil, but needs must.
This is a plot and character driven book told in a simple and linear manner.... unfortunately. Sequential in it's telling, I could easily plot a graph of the story as each milestone and arc were unveiled
√ Revenge plot. That'll be point one on said graph
√ Infiltrate enemy's camp. Point two
√ Discover the nice-looking boy who is an integral part of the enemy's camp
√ Reconnaissance
√ Develop feelings for said boy
√ Begin to doubt the rationale for the revenge plot
√ No chance of backtracking despite newly developed "feelings"
√ Attack
√ Escape
√ Double back to complete the first part of the mission with help of a certain good-looking boy
√ End of story.
I haven't read a lot of dystopian books, so that might explain my ambivalence toward Ruined. It was tough getting invested in the story and not until I'd picked it up and set it aside a few times did it finally reel me in. Emelina Flores, a Ruina princess, is out to avenge the death of her parents in addition to rescuing, Olivia, her abducted sister. After a year of planning, she succeeds in infiltrating the enemy's camp by posing as the young Prince Casimir's -of Lera- intended bride.
This is where I deducted a half star from my rating.
For such an elemental part of this story, the ease with which Em could slip into the enemy's camp was unbelievable. That no one questioned her lack of- female- travel companions makes me wonder in which time period this was set. Regardless, it should have been expected that a princess would arrive with at minimum, one female maid/or equivalent. Another half point deducted.
The author attempted to build the world of four kingdoms comprising Ruina, Lera, Vallos and Olso and while I didn't expect worldbuilding on the scale of say, Ketterdam in Six of Crows, I still would have appreciated a better description of the ambiance and atmosphere. Deduct half point.
The characters were developed enough, with Em portrayed as the cold calculating strategist and, Cas, the naive and insulated prince. The characterizations were authentic as neither protagonist was given too many unusual powers or authority.Cas was still very much a boy albeit one with extensive sword and fighting skills while Em was, intermittently, subject to bouts of fear and doubt. These rang true and gave the author room to explore future growth.
Now on to the plot. Ruina is a kingdom of people where some were born with special powers. Due to fear, prejudice, and ignorance, the kings of the other kingdoms colluded to eliminate the RUINED, leaving in their wake a grieving kingdom bent on revenge. I agree this theme/premise has been tackled successfully in other Dystopian/Fantasy books but much like the contemporary romance genre, I do believe an overused theme still has many ways in which to spin it, which the author did quite well, IMO.
Overall, I liked the story and expect book 2 will have the author throwing in more intrigue, suspense, and other interesting characters.
Actual rating: 2.5 starsMake people fear you, Emelina. Her mother’s words echoed in her head. Stop worrying about what you don’t have and start focusing on what you do. Make people tremble when they hear your name. Fear is your power.
Sorry to disappoint you Mom, but, well, fear and Emilina are not compatible. One moment the girl's a highly trained assassin, the next moment she's an uncertain girl who barely knows what to do with her body. This constant state of ambivalence got on my nerves quickly: when you can't understand what the MC is made of and changes faces quicker than you can blink. I really tried to understand Em, but she barely understood herself if at all. It's not a case where a person is trying to find her true self, no, it's the case where author gave her character a personality but forgot to concretize how that personality operates. In other words: underdeveloped. The only thing I liked about Em is how every time she entered a room, she counted ways to kill people in it:There was one knife on the tray, and Em studied it, trying to judge how sharp it was. Three quick steps across the room and she could reach around Davina for the knife to jab it in her throat before she knew what was happening. Five seconds, tops.
But in the context of the book, this skill looks like a joke, because it feels like characters are playing games they don't understand. Kids got swords and knives and they are plunging them into enemies' (?) bodies, but it looks like kids are playing war in a sandbox. They don't really understand what they are doing, they simply have fun, because it's hilarious.
Cas - the hero of the book is a blank page anyone can fill as they wish. He doesn't have a personality; he acts regarding other people's wishes. He doesn't have an opinion about a war that is raging on in his Kingdom for years now. When Em appears and starts to sympathize with the enemy, Cas doesn't think it's suspicious. He easily gives her secret military information, because he trusts her. Seriously? The prince is supposedly the best swardman in the Kingdom, but it seems he never made a step out of his sandbox. Again, I blame this on author and the lack of character development.
The romance was... dull. I want to blame insta-love, but I've encountered insta-love in books before and in some of those book it was processed quite believably. Here everything is so rushed (not only romance but action either) I didn't have time to feel anything toward characters or notice when and how they developed feelings for each other. Whether they die or live, I don't care.“You could at least pretend to be excited.”
I tried, I really did. This book was on my list of highly anticipated releases, and I was sure I'll like it. But when there's no depth to plot or characters, it's hard to make oneself feel. This book is simply generic: been there, done that. Nothing new. It's not bad either (compared to my disappointment with ACOMAF, everything is better), there were nice moments, when it felt like one more page and I'll like the book. Alas, I reached the end but that feeling never came. I blinked, closed the book and forgot about the story.
Pros:
- the characters are v v loveable – you just can’t help rooting for them
- the writing is very easy to follow
- the beginning is fast paced which helps keep the book moving
- Cas
- Kicka*s heroine
- slowburn-ish
- I stayed up 2 hours beyond bedtime to read it #rebel
- enemies to lovers trope (which is my fav so)
Cons:
- clichéd plot, clichéd idea, feels very similar to many books I’ve read (Falling Kingdom, Winner’s Curse, Throne of Glass #1 etc)
- while the writing is easy to read, it’s pretty juvenile – there aren’t metaphoric descriptions or heart racing quotes
- I thought the pacing was too fast